The world building is very excellent. I know this is a translated novel so I'm not cursing out the translator when I say. The author keeps on forgetting a few stuff like levels, status effects, etc.
The amount of sexualizing and inability to write good female characters in this book really throws me off. If they aren't soft and cute, their breasts are bursting out of their clothes and if their breasts aren't bursting out of their clothes, they're gold diggers, if they aren't gold diggers, they're stupid, or they're all of them in one. I wouldn't have complained if they had character but they don't even have that.
Also everyone just seems so stupid compared to MC(not too surprised cause well it's an Asian novel). They're all gamers so why is it that no one knows the basics?
Another thing is MC takes sooo long to level up but everyone else just jumps to where he is in a short amount of time. He does like 15k damage on average so why are people who only do like 1k average damage catching up to him so fast?
Also, why do you make a game that can make characters op if you want to kill them. Is it fun to see a struggle before they die or....
Why is it only MC that goes back in time, why not someone stronger who has more IQ or EQ? There are moments when MC just straight up blows his cover and everyone is like "ok"
I’m just a quarter way through this novel so I’ll read more and hopefully change my review for the better.
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This is a story with a similar feel to "History's strongest senior brother" or " History's number 1 founder" or library of heaven's path". But it is just not pick so sad
The writing quality is very good, you really can't complain about it, the story starts really great and it is fun to follow it, great writing style. The character is perfect too, not some dumb/pervert/ idiot mc, instead we get for once a mc which is smart. Update stability is good, could be better, like idk 10 chapters a day,
The MC's name is Eddie Edward. The translators are literally trolling at this point.
all the most amazing novel.
It was my first time reading a novel and the experience is amazing and best!
I totally love the FL and the ML too
Welcome, everyone. It's me, the author.
Just wanna say really glad to have you here.
It's my first time doing something that is in another language (I'm from SEA btw). So there might be a few errors here and there, I hope you guys would forgive me.
If you are a brother or a sister or an apache helicopter who is interested in Yandere, you are in the right place.
I first intended to create yandere characters that have depth and personalities. Since I have seen some weird yandere novels, I kinda wanted to create my own. I do love the obession.
Enjoy!!
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A copy paste of different work/novel author only changed the MC name and other characters, this is dumb.
Rebirth: Hollywood by Soules King is already 160+ chapter, i bet this one will not much different
Author again! Here to release another amazing review for my newest work.
Okie readers, this book is a book in a science world with fantasy elements!
What do I mean? Have you ever had a thought that strange supernatural forces are always hiding in the darkness masked by the reign of technology?
Our MC is a supervillain with a system that helps him cheat the order of the gods above. He is an anti-hero who doesn't risk his life without a reason.
The story is set in an apocalyptic world where they're Superheroes (Deviants), Supervillains (Mutants), and scarily intelligent zombies (Variants).
They'll be steady character growth from weak and naive to cunning and strong. This book has romance but no harem.
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Chapter Release Rate:
14 Chapter/Week +Bonus Chapters For Fulfilling Author Goals!
Well, time for you to read the book, and see for yourself how amazing it could be.
you know why i rated it low despite liking it? just simple, you always mention ding! 125 exp increase but unlike any game there isn't even a character status or an exp bar! how do you if the mc levels up? according to the author's decision? what is the basis of ranking up? and there are skill points but no use! you have left too many holes to the story. i can barely stay reading it.
I saw si-fi and thought, ok, space. but no, this was actually just a great story that was very well told. If there is a si-fi element it's the technology but other than that, the novel is about people, the human condition and It resonated with me so well.