To: AuthorThe concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointingThe main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could sayAnd of course the Slight but annoying grammar errorsI’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing
Nice plot with a good background I also like how the characters were described and how detailed the story is.The suspension and mystery is very good here.
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The design of this world the author has created isbreally unique and refreshing take on "system like" novels with the main character's "book" and "reader" abilities he accumulated over time. While the "book" ability system seems a little confusing at first, it constantly is being further updated and explained in great detail throughout the story.The author does a great job explaining the world and the details when we need to know them to understand the novel. I was very pleasantly surprised with the amount of attention to detail that was put into this story, and appreciate the thoughtful consideration the author put into creating this world for us to read.I look forward to see how this story progresses for Leo and what kind of abilities he will get, and the heights he will reach. I hope we'll get to see him experience more roles as a "reader" in different and interesting worlds.
What happened author? why did you suddenly stop???????? it's such a good series!!!!! please come back!!!
I would say that I am having fun reading this right now despite some of the writing errors however the big downfall of the novel for me is that the story progression is too slow. I know that it is a new novel but taking more than 5-10 chapters for a scene to progress is kind of annoying but all in all it still fun
I like this story. The plot intrigued me. dark and horror atmosphere is also very pronounced. Even though I forgot which chapter I liked about this story.
good job and keep the spirit to continue this story.
This is too funny if you are someone who can read without taking things seriously you are guaranteed a good laugh this one made me tear up this needs to get picked!
Magic, Vampires, Natural Disasters, The SCP foundation.
This novel has it all.
Especially excited by that last one.
Hope it gets picked.
Cheers.
I have read the first 30 chapter and can say that it has good writing quality and stability of updates.
The story development and character design isn't really for me. While it is decent, I find it rather too generic (good guy trope) and I found his reincarnation rather useless, maybe there will be a reason for that later but for now, all I see is a somewhat obedient little boy in the MC.
He had merged with the previous soul, yet there is no fear, or worry, or even acknowledgement that he was killed. Where is the caution, he goes around worrying about his mother, yet why is that? He just came into this world and the memories doesn't seem to affect him, can you generate affection quickly for someone this quickly? If he does have memory of his life as prince then why is there no fear or even a thought about his murder. What is the reason that he wants to get strong? Is it revenge, to protect his loved ones, I still have not found a reason for him or the story. I see no tension or reason to follow the story, his sister seems far more interesting.
Usually the environment of fighting for thrones make the characters mature, yet the MC seems to lack that.
While the story seems to check most boxes I really did not get an interest in following the MC's story. His origin not really that interesting, his circumstance he seem to not care, his cheat and bloodline a bit generic. I expected more then this from Invincible Corruption Manual.
Writing Quality - 5
Stability of Updates - 5
Story Development - 3
Character Design - 3
World Background - 4
The total score - 4
As of this review, I have read up to chapter 102. Thus far, the story has been phenomenal. No complaints here.
I thoroughly enjoy the methodical approach when it comes to explaining the backstory. The pacing sits very comfortably between unbearably slow to the point that everyone forgot (ex. Hey guys, remember this small detail about 350 chapters ago? Martial God Asura, I’m looking at you...) and way too fast to where the backstory feels like an integral parallel format of the novel. Very well done.
My one and only HUGE gripe about this work is the grammar and spelling issues. They are not too common, but just plentiful enough to make you reread portions of a chapter. Big no no.
4.4 / 5
Keep up the great work, author-san.