If you are blind I'll be your eyes
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On this whole platform this thing second only to Shadow Slave. It's a shame if people miss out on this. Get it to the top my friends! Great characters, worldbuilding, comedy, whatever you want. It has it!
So far the the story is mysteriously interesting, I can't wait to see the end of volume 2!!! And also love the new cover it's really pretty!!
This book is fantastic
The writing quality is okay but I’m dropping it. I got to around chapter 30 and the every freaking character s-s-stutters and it’s freaking annoying me. People can be surprised or scared or have pretty much any negative emotion without stuttering. It’s okay if one of the characters has a habit of stuttering, it can even be an obvious sign of character development when he develops more confidence but the excessive amount of stuttering by multiple characters, both the typically confident and unconfident, up to this point is a huge turn off.
This is more like a comedy - all issues get easily resolved & MC gains another follower through the same MO each time: strong fighter is unconvinced & unwilling to become a slave. Other slave demonstrates their power (usually by breaking a cup 10 feet away). Strong man gets convinced & signs the contract.
Cut & paste multiple times. The events unfold without much buildup or tension, after 60 chapters this is beginning to read like a comedy.
Interesting book. The Author did a great work developing the plot and characters. I look forward to the future of the book
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righto, writing this at chapter thirty. story is great so far, and you already see lots of action happening. very quick development but hot a lot of info waves coming at you. world does have some theme to it but not overly detailed though the author has always been able to fix this and he's promised it so I'm going to assume amazing world. all the characters have their own definement, though as of now, one of them needs more defining in my opinion as she seems to just be a yes sister. otherwise, this book is definitely a book you should add to your library. also from what I've seen, it's not like most other werewolf books but does have some elements in it. pretty great so far.
The Novel was decent until he gets to the new realm. Everything after that is a straight copy (not inspired) of the most generous master. It's fine to take inspiration from other works, but copying is just wrong.
I’m really enjoying the story so far. I haven’t heard of a sadistic system so far so this is originally for me. I like the take your doing with the story and can’t wait for more. The only bad said for me as a fluent English speaker is that the grammar is pretty bad. As long as the improve upon that or get someone to proof read then it should be all good. Best wishes from a new fan and hope to see the story continue
Wow, this is one of the best books I've read this year.
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New storyline.
Great story telling.
Fresh outlook on tdg make's it more interesting to read.
MC amazing and badass from the get go.