I’ll be cheering you on for your WSA entry, as I can see the potential in this lore.
The prologue provides a clear direction and a fine briefing on what to expect from the ‘peak’ experts of this world.
The words are easy to interpret, concise, and help the readers to grasp the settings of each scene without having to think too much.
The information feedback is just as smooth with little fillers, especially when the characters are mentioned with little snippets of their past, present, and their expectations for the future.
This is slowly building a web of information and connections, but if one isn’t careful enough and is simply reading for the sake of skimming through, it’s easy to be lost in the storytelling down the line.
