BeyondTheLaw
Raw name: 我的身体有bug
Status: 1200 Chapters (Completed)
As usual, webnovel summary doesn't do justice to novel. When I first read summary, I almost skipped it due to feeling like fan-fics. Its about a person who somehow gets a bug and breaks balance of game system.
Novel is good. Only that when the novel is starting its very abrupt. The novel just starts without giving info who the MC is or where the MC is or MC is bugged or not. Reading about ~10 Chapters you will get the sense of story.
Writer u are shameless but one of the best pervert author with good writing skills .This novel is gonna be good. Ty
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I must admit I am impressed! For once, their is no system or rebirth Mmorg gamer. The MC works all on his own merits and is for once a magical class! Yes, there is a bit of stereotypes but not to the point of gagging. Read up to chapter 5 at least before making up your mind.
The writing is bad ,the story is good,the wirkd background is good ,the other characters are good but the biggest **** is that he has some absolute resistance that gives him 1000% resistance and yet he has to be careful to fight a beowolf,also its been a long time since he has give and taker and semblance copy yet he did not copy ozpins and the others ability,I think its a waste of time and people feeling if you wanted to nerf your character dont fuking give him things that make him over powered,honestly the things that were added by the author into the story are **** because he gives pkwers and then nerfs them
After reading it so far, I feel like the plot is very disjointed. The overall concept wasn’t a bad one but the execution caused it to turn out confusing and hard to read.
MC is stupid just like everyone in his world but not a little stupid, no, he is dumb as **** and the story development is as dumb as him.The only intelligent girl is described as a character annoying as ****.The other character are not developed and it seems that there are no emotion beside "angry" in this world.If you want a good novel go for scholar system.The novel here is a cheap scholar system novel without the good part
can anyone tell me the Chinese name of this book
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I always loved Greek Mythology. This book had really interesting chapters and I hope more chapters will be posted. It’s grammar is impeccable. ?
The Writing Quality is 5 Stars based off the average webnovel, with the Stability of Updates being very good at time of review.Im mentioning this all before because what im going to say is me hating on the story a bit.I dont think the concept was as well executed as it could be, or maybe its just my own interpretation of what I read.The story starts off great, but there seems to be so much filler it dulls the mind, and one of the MC's being this litteral god of weaponry who can create new techniques within a week, makes you want to see the other MC's (Rean's) specialty.And by 64 hes a fuckin blacksmith, now dont get me wrong, I love blacksmithing novels, but to be fair Ive only ever found two. Blacksmithing can be made cool, but it seems that by the time of mid-story, the author just didnt care about making Rean anything special.I mean he has the light element, while Roan has the dark element. There twins, when I read these details I was thinking," Oh thats so badass, theyre gonna have this connection of hate-portrayal (from what I could see by there personalities twoards another) where they actually enjoy eachothers company, but theyll never say that.Rean will be a master healer who benefits the tribe by supporting and giving ideas, while Roan is this master of combat who knows all weapons "Sure thats a bit dramaticized, but Roan does end up being like that, he is a badass kid who knows how to beat people above his realm of cultivation, he knows every weapon in the universe, he makes techniques when hes bored and cultivates hard.What does rean do? Makes fuckin low-quality steel and sells it off, then the next chapter we see Roan hinting to him to try and learn how to use the light element sense he collects it faster than Roan so he should master something of his own instead of relying on Roan, the **** does he do, he makes a god damn light saber.I dont think Rean is especially stupid, I just believe the author is making him retarded.Sorry for the bad grammar and the swear at the end, but this is just so sad to see such a great concept unexplored.
Great novel. First book and loving the flow of the story.cant wait for the next update ? will be tune in for sure?.Let support aspiring authors??☺️
