BeyondTheLaw
U mean "let the romance builds" as a harem right:v? U can make a not forced pokemon harem if u have the skills. Juz asking I juz don't want women to be heart broken becuz of some stupid plot rules. If the side characters accidentally fall in love with our mc don't be a d**k and force them to break up(u r the author so u r like a god in ur book so don't abuse that power and make innocents suffer from being unable unite with their love and assume their love is not true love cuz u manipulate them) :)
Basically, it's a mess. The author is incoherent and the translator keeps making mistake with pronouns he/she, his/her.
For example, MC is supposed to to have a lvl 80 character however it has the stats of a lvl 1 noob.
If the level doesn't increase stats (like in 99% of games/stories) then author needs to say what it's used for.
Also, this is supposed to be a game that transformed into a reality and sometimes, author says MC and his character act like one but the next moment he talks about keyboards...
Love the concept of unlucky MC finding a way to solve a problem and encountering so much fun staff along the journey. The characters were well written, the plot is indeed intriguing. Definitely worth trying.
What happened to the chapters? It just stopped updating after a while??? Why??????????????? This here to make tge word count ushendjddjdjjdjdjdjddnjddjdjdjdjjdjdjdjddjdjjddjjdjdhdhffjjfndbdjsjdhdhdhdhdhdhhddhdhhddhdhdhhdhddhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhddhhddhdhdhshshsshshshshshshshshdhdhdhdhdhhddhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhddhdhhdhddhhddhhdhddhdhdhdhdhhddhhdhddhdhhddhdhhddhhdhdhdhddhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdddjndnddjjdjdxjdjjddjjddjdjdjfjdjfjdjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjbdhdh
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Amazing story that tugged at my heartstrings. I love reading short stories and this one just gave me bliss .Thanks a lot for sharing! You guys should definitely read it! Y'all won't be disappointed!
If you are an avid dragon lover… READ THIS RIGHT NOW. THAT IS AN ORDER. The book deserves to be a famous story at the top of Webnovel, the pacing is perfectly done, not too slow, and not too fast, and the world building and character development is top tier.
Extremely well done, author!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The story had a lot of potential, unfortunately the translation sucks.
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Hello! I would just like to say that I really really enjoy your book! I dont think I’ve had this much fun reading something in a while. The story itself can be gory but does have a sense of comedy to it that I can really appreciate. Definitely adding to my reading list!!!
I really hope they revive this novel and it get chosen for real this is a great novel and they did in no justice leaving it hanging like this
