Hello Author here. Thank you for giving your time to read this novel of mine. This is my first novel and I hope all of you can instruct me on my shortcomings in this novel
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First of all props for putting your story out there takes hard work to do that. now saying that , the story feels like it needs some major editing and proof reading. some of the sentences just dont make sense so wilr i say cheers for your work and story ideas, ima bow out on reading more of this. salute
I've read a good number of chapters and have seen how the story is well written.
It has a unique storyline. I love the writing quality and it makes me want to read further.
Everything is amazing and I can't believe this story hasn't gotten enough love. Arthur_Inverse is a fantastic writer who knows how to hook in readers with incredible prose and witty story beats. I'd give this six stars if I could, but I suppose 5s across the board will have to do.
Was decent for a villian protagonist until I started noticing things like a reluctance to kill peopl in general if they are good/innocent. also the story starts deviating from argon and becomes about the world inhabitants and how everybody is supposed to be United and loving and how evil will never prosper. First off the way author writes cultvators is off cultivators pursue benifits over anything else including over morals (for good cultivators the benefit must be astronomical to forgoe their morals). I don’t necessarily have an issue with any of the actions taking place I just have an issue for the reasoning on why. they are doing stupid for stupid reasons all because it’s what they ’re supposed to do. pls take the DARK tag out as nothing the protag has done is dark begrudgingly I’ll let you have the villain tag, but I will say that the dark moon clan is better candidate to be this supposed villain story’s protag
I just got bored, I wasn't for me, and I don't like musk, so seeing his last name again and again just irk me.
I read a bit ahead so i can tell that this is a great story and it gets even better and crazier, despite everything it's beginning is a little tame compared to later on, and as someone who read a lot of pancakes works i can tell she came a long way and improved a lot so this as one of her latest works stands out as quite solid.
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This story is very raw and very soulful. I enjoyed reading it.
I did as I always do and read all the free chapters before making a review.
In my opinion, this is an amazing novel with an amazingly rich world-building and interesting characters. The main character isn't overpowered and doesn't have any 'cheat' abilities. Infact beside one advantage he has above most (but not all) he would be considered very average in terms of talent. This slower style of improvement in the mc allows the author to bring out my personal favourite feature of this book, highly interesting world building and side character backgrounds. While I've seen some comments complaining about the story being a bit slow at points I think it isn't a bad trait but infact shows that the author takes his time writing a detailed story instead of trying to pump out more chapters for their own gain.
Overall the beginning of this novel at least by my standards can be considered one of the best I've read on this website and I really hope the author keeps up his amazing work!
The title of this book gives you a pretty good, well spot on, idea of what you are getting into. If it tickes you in your special place then you will enjoy it.
What the title doesn't cover is the absolute hilarity that the author comes up with. I can't read this around anyone because every couple of chapters there will be some situation that makes me laugh hard and loud. Not a good look in a quiet room.
Only thing that could be better (and probably not worth a 5* but i dont gas) is the update/release schedule.
Anyway, read it and enjoy, or don't and die lonely, sad, and murdered. Up to you I guess.