MVS is still one of my best reads and jks is already an expert for giving his readers a cliffhanger after every chapter.Now it's time to start a new system book!!!!
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Interesting story. It hooked me from the start. Ashton is quite a character. At first I thought he was overly shameless but later he was just a crazy friend to little Matt. The story flows wonderfully also l liked the introduction to Terminus. The awakening was also portrayed nicely keep it up.
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There was a novel like this before, but unfortunately, only 4 chapters were translated for soem reason. I think it was called Livestream: King of Death, or something like that. It was translated here on WN, so you can look for it if you want.
I went out of my way to write a full review for this story, because I felt like it had a lot of potential, decent plot idea, and the author can improve significantly.
Writing Quality is a bit disappointing. "Show, don't tell" is a cornerstone of writing. There are lots of explanations for everything with info dumps, instead of a slow but steady discovery. Various descriptions are awkward many times as well. In addition, there are a number of typos. I honestly just expect more from a premium novel.
Author updates regularly, which is great.
Story development feels pretty basic. Nothing groundbreaking or new. There's a system. Someone has transmigrated. Theres a tournament arc. Etc. It doesn't pull me in because I feel like I've seen it all before. For a world that is being invaded, it doesn't feel like it at all. Everyone seems too casual about it all. Normal people just living their lives casually when the world is falling apart around them. We had a global pandemic where people were dying from covid, and things changed everywhere. I can't imagine monsters invading, and people just acting like martial arts are just "sports" anymore. You give little to no impression about how society has changed from this.
Character design is a little boring. I wish that there was a little more character development. Everyone other than the MC feels a bit two dimensional. Even the MC sometimes feels a bit boring. I don't know how you plan to bring character growth to the MC either since he was already an adult, and he is doing the same thing he was doing in his previous life. There needs to be personal growth for the characters, otherwise you result in a Xianxia novel where everyone is rigid and unreasonable.
World background also got 3 stars because there is nothing new about a world being invaded by monsters.
Trust me when it comes to this author no novel he writes can be bad I enjoy his two other novels so I’ll gladly try out this one!
Can’t wait to dive into this new read.
I thought this story is gonna be interesting cuz the title and synopsis looks so. Well, it's interesting at first but it gets boring eventually. There's too much unnecessary information.
So the novel is good I like it, for me it is a new idea, but minus -3 stars for the gender mistakes. His sister is changing gender so fast it isn't nice to read, I mean really if you translate a novel at least try to do it properply
Writing quality: Its terrible (1)
Stability of Updates: Author seems to upload everyday so ok (5)
Story development: Ye... just no (1)
Character Design: average (3)
World Background: Also average (2)
score: 2.4
Why does this have such high reviews?