Mainly like the other martial arts novels and same concept too. The interesting part about this is that he actually has a goal which is different. Has a lot of potential but not sure what I think of it so far going to wait until some more chapters get released.
Did you drop the novel author? It was so abrupt.
Hi got the suggestion of this book from a book fighting destiny about this book and others.I'm new to the world to novels but this book is simply amazing .i wish it wasn't too short though.
For now i think it’s going well, but MC needs to differentiate himself from the rest. If all he’ll do is befriend strong characters he himself seems useless. it should centre him and if he befriends or kill’s the 5 plane children the it’s a bonus, all the 5 plane children happen to just make the story more interesting is what I’m saying. Basically what i‘m saying is i read the story but MC still feels detached, so far his feminine looks seem like the best thing about him when actually his potential is just as great as if not better than the plane children, but i guess maybe I’m judging to much he’s still 13 after all. Anyways I don’t know if Author see’s these comments but I’m definitely looking forward to his character development. ✌
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This is one of the best originals I've seen on this site and everyone should try to read it.
That being said there are two major faults with worldbuilding I'd like to point out. This shouldn't stop anyone from trying it, though.
First, the money. This new world works like a tribal society. There's no agreement between tribes or races to enforce the usage of gold and silver as currency. No one trusts one another, humans and non-humans. There's no reason for gold and silver to be accepted as currency to the whole world. At best it could maybe be traded by weight in gold, but even that is fickle. People need survivability, not precious metals from Earth that should have no value there.
The worst is that the author had the perfect plot device to avoid using gold: Essence. If people could exchange Essence between them, there is no reason for gold and it's pretty clear that, plot wise, essence is meaningful for everyone, no matter the race, and universally acceptable.
Second: Manuals. The world has a system where characters can level up stats or get skill from monsters they kill, using 'Essence'. Yet, the author added books that the MC would find and learn techniques, Wuxia-style.
That really didn't go well with his system plot. It would be far better for them to be regular skills from the system.
Like the dagger technique he got by killing a bandit, for example, instead of a book the character should have a chance to gain the skill of the target, monster or human, this way he would have only the skills the Author wants him to have in the end.
Like I said, overall this is a very good novel, but these two points stuck like a sore thumb for me. I'd even advise the author to rewrite them. It'd be a pain, but worth the hassle.
Shameless 5 star author review!!!!! Glad you were able to stop by and take a look at this book!
I take my inspiration from the Legendary Mechanic and The Strongest Sword God. Both of these books kept me up all night for weeks on end and now I'm getting revenge by making a book that will do the same!!!! Muahahaha.
Seriously though, expect intense action and world building on two ends, both I. Socrathia and on Earth. Our MC may have the knowledge of the future but that's not going to make things easy for him.
I will do my best to add the reviewers and commentators thoughts into the book, and let's explore this VRMMORPG and post apocalyptic world together!!!!
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Donnt do slight romance, don’t just make about him and his single life do the romance good please
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Seems interesting I'll add it but won't read till it has about 12 chapters cuz thats normally where apocalypse series get interesting. Also screw 140 characters -_-