I liked this story and I really hope you guys do to. This is one book I liked and I hope you guys will like this book too. I hope you enjoy this
Is hurt to see idiotic MC, but i'm looking forward when MC Epic Come Back not with his idiotic and low EQ but with mature mind and stable personality, i'm sorry but lazy, talk more do less mc is not my cup a tea, he only mocking some one effort, without goldfinger, MC is nothing. But still i will read this novel till MC Growth Up.
I am the author, I hope you like my novel
This is a novel with a big brain.
If you like this type of novel, please leave me a comment and give the author a little more confidence!
IS THIS THE STUFF IM INTO?
I liked the concept of the novel, it really hooked me in at the beginning because of the giant system, after 70+ chapters though i started to see more stupid decisions by characters and sped up storytelling as well as nationalism which just completely took me out of the novel.
So far at have read the first and currently only chapter, so far everything is good. I can't wait for chapter two!!! [img=recommend][img=update]
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Tooo fluffy~~~~~ Cute male leads. Cute couple. Love the arguments and bickering. But the developmemt of story slightly slow. Hope more frequent update.
An interesting story. Nice opening. The development of each character is very good. I also like the writing style of this author. Even though I have only read a few chapters, the writing is very understandable and very clear. I don't really understand punctuation but as far as I read it is good.
Keep up this fine writing!
BRUH THIS IS GREAT :'D
Well, first, the writing itself is great, and I really love how the author portrays things. It felt like I could visualize it :D
AND THENNN THE PLOT IS SO GOOD LIKEE I FELT SO EMOTIONAL READING IT :'D
Man I love the characters and the sadness :')
Great work, author! Thank you for this! <3
THİS NOVEL İS SO GOOD. hmm i dont like unemotional mc's but i like that mc because. he is emotional but cant show it.
1 i think mc needs a rival equal to him(rival should be same age as mc)(he can be like son of life or something like that ahadshahahahha)
2 İ think you should not give superabundant powers to mc You may find it difficult to control.
3 AND MOST İMPORTANT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE describe characters.
i cant remember the character you introduced to me 100 chapters ago
4 and i think you act like we can see what you dreamed of when you writing. you should describe places to us
5 dont missunderstand me this is one of best novels i have ever read so i dont want it go bad. i just write what i want to see.
AND MOST İMPORTANT THİNG
İ LOVE YOU PLEASE PLEASE MOST CHAPTERS(SORRY FOR BAD ENGLAND)
It would be funnier if he went to a parallel universe where all webnovels were translated till the end. Too unrealistic, perhaps? ??????