Pretty good pacing, with the story not feeling rushed, and overall really good writing quality.The Pacing is a bit on the slower side so we don't get to see that many sides of the protagonist as of chapter 6 but he seems pretty chill and level headed. His name keep making me think he would turn out to be a vampire thought.keep up the great work!
After reading everything till here i would like to say a few words. I like the setting and the fact that you will soon start the game world, i like the smut and the progression so far.What i didn't like about the history is the beggning, i can say that i would change the order of some chapters and for me would make more sense. Keep going
rare plot, great potential, good plot, and honestly it gives off versatile superstar vibs. good gob author hungry for more.
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Ugh. Mention of IQ in description is a dead giveaway of retarded story.How could author possibly write about someone with six times his IQ? It is not even parody. Dismissed.
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Good stuff so far! The story is intriguing, but I recommend having a better description of events. I feel like you've heard this before but, "show, don't tell." Other than that, it's a good read
Cultivation Novel, but not from China.People be like: B-b-bakana!!!Then Chinese People be like: You're courting death!And lastly Chinese government be like: I will find you and I will you!Just saying lol???