This novel is too much. Make the reader confuse and the storyline seems jumping around from a to c to... very uncomfortable... sorry for not continuing reading the rest???
This story is annoying. Very annoying. The theme of magi is great. After all, Warlock of the Magus World gave hope to despairing Chinese novel scene. Giving us a new template of protagonists. But this story? It's irritating on so many levels. I'll just list them for simplicity's sake:1. The body's old will still remains in the body. Which is the rationale for MC making down-right idiotic choices. 2. Everytime someone needs help the MC will be reminded of someone he cares about. Chubby man? Reminds him of his father. Little girl? Reminds him of his little sister. Mean-spirited girl? Reminds him of his older sister. He uses these excuses to act like a shining beacon of righteousness. 3. Superificial MC. First heroine introduced wears a mask. After he sees her appearance for the first time...he moans to himself that he should've been nicer to her. Not only that, his impression of her went up by 1000x. 4. The cheat should've just been a memory palace. But in effect it acts like a deity tier artefact. MC hit by psychological attack? Blocked. MC hit by dream spell? Blocked. The cheat conveniently saves the MC from every little thing. 5. The MC has no idea how to use his cheat at all. Instead of gaining a foundation by reading books, he choses to spend his time trying to chat up beauties. Sigh.6. From time to time the MC will randomly preach socialist ideaologies. About how he believes there's non hierarchy in society et cetera. All in all...this protagonist doesn't deserve to be a magus.
Mc is insufferable, can stand him but the story/ plot and the world background looks good so far. Only 70 chapters in but I hope you merged them together or killed the idiot cause I will quit otherwise.
Terrible Grammar, really bad character development, bad world background illustration, no character growth and worst of all starting with an MC that is 70+ years old? No thanks. I guess this novel has this high rating because he deletes reviews with low rating otherwise I dont know what you people in the 5 star review section are smoking to give such rating.Note! if this comment is deleted I will be posting a Screenshot of posting this review to prove it was deleted. Thank you.
Dropped before Ch42This story had potential. My biggest issue was the subpar handling of being a human and a monster.This first comes to play around the death of twin kids stage and the aftermath of how that bs was handled by the MC.
I used to like this series in the beginning but for me the MC lacks charisma and needed his "grandpa" So when the little martin left it didn't feel right and got boring or me
First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.
I like the story, it's pretty interesting. But holy god not sure if it's the author or the translator, but something is seriously wrong. Especially when it gets to about CH. 237, it's like paragraphs are just missing and the quality of translation drops further with grammar errors etc. Not to mention later on the translator decides to chop chapters into three separate chapters instead of one long chapter.
Very interesting story, from the title I thought it was going to be like some of the other "Teaser" Novels that have been released these few weeks. The title made me expect it to be something that caused the MC to become very OP quickly but to my surprise while it does have that aspect it isn't so quick to make the character strong. This story seems like it has a lot of potential unlike others which break the story (by making the MC OP) so much that their is very little plot or story so that the book ends quickly. I hope this story gets picked and it continues down the route and doesn't stray off and become something cliché.
it got updated!!!!! woah!!! thank you author!!!.................................... ..............................................
Mediocre at best, seems like a newbie writerShort chapters with little or useless information which makes them boring, chapters 26-35 can be shortened and edited to 1 or 2 chapters.Cheat could be explained better and the whole cultivation system is still unclear, until now talents were only people from influencial families that received lots of resources. MC seems gutsy or ignorant, being so weak, but acting all mighty with fmc that is a few major realms higher.Usual face slapping, but done in a poor manner, starting from mc being uderstimated and badmouthed then he does something amazing and everyone is shocked to the core, but still continue to look down on him and hope that he will fail...
Website: Qidian CNStatus: OngoingViews: 3.07 millionRecommendation: 0.36 millionRating: 9.5/10 from 2319 readersNo of chapters: ~702No of works: 4Above stats were borrowed from the CN site at the time of posting. THIS IS NOT A REVIEW. Since the rating is good, maybe the novel may not disappoint.