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Straight up just good stuff, its wayyyy better than what I originally thought it would be! I will be joining the conga line of people waiting for more chapters!
i like authors who can spelli like authors who have a general grasp of the english languagei like authors who arent mentally challengedwhat a great author3/3
I don't feel conflict when I am reading this. I don't like that he is into music because unfortunately, I cannot listen to music in my mind as I read this piece of text. I also do not like the urban setting in a cultivation novel. World background is a 2/5 and not a 1/5 since there is a character that shares martial arts secrets with the rest of the world; usually, in cultivation novels, sects hold martial arts books as secrets. Not so in this novel, it is a breath of fresh air as it shows that there are characters that are willing to share with others. I do not really like this book. It is, however, an okay read in case you have nothing else to do.
The sheer impracticality and stupidity of the MC is bordering wishy washy naive thoughts. The story isn't good and too fast paced with cardboard characters. The story has no flow at all it's just jumps around from one thing to the next to force push the plot and make the pacing more fast. Not recommended for those interested in well thought out stories.
Rated it 5 so people would read it. Great story, slow paced, just my cup of tea. But the translation is total garbage tho. It’s borderline MTL.
Why the love score well it's not because the novel is bad quite the o posit the novel is actually quite good and a decent read but the Translation quality is really bad MTL is most likely better sadly so to that get fix it will get low score for me because i cant recommenced this to ppl that PAYS for this whit a good Consciousness
Yahooooo~!!! Then dis' loli here is the second~! Same with my predecessor, this little loli too will not stand on ceremony and gives you All Big Five Stars~!!!! Keep on typing stories, Erosaint-sama~!!!!
The further the story progresses the dumber the MC gets as he makes elementary mistakes such as creating enemies and instead of focusing on getting stronger he is busy chasing after women. Furthermore is MC always after new women but the ones, who are already in harem are completely left out oft he story.
the idea was great, but what I have a problem with is how everyone he meets is way stronger than him and how he is always oppressed by them
I’v been waiting a long time for a fan fiction like this. I hope you never drop this story. I hope this novel goes on for at least 2000 chapters.
I love it, i was looking for something to read and this caught my eye. Well written and the author keeps the story interesting, a must read