I was really pleasantly surprised of how good this was and then when i reached the end i found out that this is the same author of one of my other favorite books !!! I cant wait to see what direction you take this in!
I cant take this book seriously. so my man artic dies by helping a woman, sO what does he fucking do after his transmigiration?!?! Thats right! NOT ONLY HELP A FUVKING WOMAN, GOVE HER KNOWLEDGE. precious Knowledge that is literally how people gain power!!! Oh uea dont forget the fucking broken power system. the power system is based on “laws” which can give you numerous abilities given how knowledgable you are, so if you arent seeing the problem here ill tell you, THE KNOWLEDGE IS SHARABLE, IF THERES A SINGLE GOD OUT THERE THEN THE ENTIRE WORLD CAN BE INFESTED BY GODS. I mean sure there are law againts doing this, this is kept in order by the other gods but theres nothing they could do if someone decides to do this, well untill its too late atleast. what stopping a man from printing books and books of knowlede Of Laws that can help you become a god and spread them across the world?! By the time Anyone noticed itll be too fucking late. if iM to talk about charectors, all ill say is thier dogshit, plain, and unintresting im every way possible. Hell the main charector is pretty much a Robot whos knowledable in Random shiT, who Knows why. The typos In the bigining of the storys are inumarable and countless. this is not helped by the fact How author changes Names and titles every other fucking chapter for no absolutefucking reason. All in all I lost a few fucking iq points. i dont Want to put the author down in any way shape or form but All im saying is, its a intresting idea but The author stumbles on the execution terribly. this is for the first few cHapters btw, so no doubt the autho got as the chapters went but i Just cant stand the First 50.
Yhis has been a very intersting story. Im so caught into it, I want to keep reading more and more. It very thrilling, and gory. The characters and descriptions are very well thought out.
Updates don't seemed to happen often. Buy I do hope to eventually read more when it comes out
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Honestly one of the best things that i have read in a while. The pacing it slow but it all makes sense. The characters are likeable for the most part. Some answers are missing but I think that is on purpose. Keep up the good work I am looking forward to reading more ^_^
INTERESTING STORY!It was really worth the read...The way the author described each scene was so great that I could almost picture them out clearly in my mind.Keep it up, I hope to see more chapters in the coming days.*^_^*
As of Chapter 110Writing Quality: 5/5Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far.Story Development: 4/5The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds.Updating Stability: 5/5If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates.World Background: 4/5Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand.Overall: 4.4I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.