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READ IT. It's worth it believe me. It is something different from all the other webnovels and i like all the others in the top 10 popula section too. It all beginns on a low level and it becomes better. It also contains much humor and a density with sad moments where the story becomes really distant and then there are these funny moments which didn't seem not in place like in other storys. I also love the world building and how they tell the story, which is pretty realistic, as far as reborn in a other world can be realistic. Maybe the only point which could be better would be the slaughter and the brutalism. Sry for that english i am swiss ^^.
Just the synopsis alone got melove the plot of this book ???
This story has serious potential to going premium and I'm shocked not many people read this yet give it a shot since it's free it'll give the author a reason to keep writing this hidden gem
such an amazing and wonderful story. God bless
Radueriel: Like what you see now?
Oh, I loved the suspense so much and also the cliffhangers. This story is something a reader will not stop reading. If there's a few moee chapters, I might read it until the last part. Great start!
Hi, Everyone, Please give my first work a chance to entertain you, I have thought a lot into this before writing this And would love all the remarks you would give , good or bad, if it helps or encourages me bring out better content , I will take it to heart. Thank you and be well
I love this story, it is a breath of refreshing slice of life air after reading those more gritty novels. When I first read the teaser of this I was immediately attracted to it for it's unique concept and others might say it's like those japanese dungeon making or dungeon master novels but for me it's not. Just think special shop that sells dungeon experience that will allow your cultivation and survivability to grow in a world where most dungeon shops have become mild boring entertainment options. The MC offers tasty food, high tech apps/facilities and cute adorable PANDAS! The story start out slow and easy BUT as all good stories go there will come a time where MC will be faced with the ultimate choice for his dungeons and himself. In the crossroads of the MC there will be a time it will get bloody/gritty BUT I ask you to stay, read it thru and get your tissues at the ready. I love this story and will stay to see it all the way to the end, afterall what girl won't not like adorable cuddly animals, delicious food and dungeon instances!! I got some fave monsters in the shop and I hope they together with the MC will grow! I love you Ke Mi your my fave!!! ?
I know, shamelessly reviewing my own book. This 140 minimum charter count is ridiculous but then again a honest review would be longer then that so all good.
I'll give 5 stars as keep up the good work, but seriously give me a chapter flush or something i can't really tell how good this is actually
From what I've read so far you have a really unlimited imagination which is really good for an author, the story is not perfect so there's room for growth and improvement.If anyone that likes virtual reality and would like to have a their imaginations spin then you can go ahead to try this book.
This book has a lot of promise I hope to see the character grow and to see this world that the writer has started to create expand at the moment still waiting for this book to get more chapters
