Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy!
Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy!
Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy!
Shameless 5 star from the author here. I hope you all enjoy!
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A very good book, very happy that I have found it. Upsetting just slightly that there is inconsistent updates. Still very good. Thank you, doing this for ss.
When update? When update?
Good story by the way, so the MC didn't have a hidden background? Or he has?. When update?
I just want to say that if you continue this story maybe you can be at the top 50 or 10 ( if you can make this story interesting)
Its hard to write this given I’ve been here since chapter 20, but I’m done. I’m not going to spoil the plot, but I am going to list the major problems. 1. Over the course of the novel the ‘system’ becomes an afterthought. It’s a common problem amongst novel’s that use a system with balance, and large bricks of text becoming harder to manage. It ends up getting updated once every hundred chapters. 2. Eiro becomes more, and more 1 dimensional as the story progresses. Without giving specifics Eiro loses his initial wrathful charm as it gets replaced with a more karen like anger. 3. Dice goes for way too much consistently causing random important plots to be dropped, and filler added. At chapter 600 3 giant plots have been seemingly forgotten that immediately come to mind. This compounds with the massive roster that leaves many characters thin. This all slowly ate at me for the last hundred chapters, and I’m dropping it now. Goodluck, hopefully Dice fixes this stuff so you can enjoy his work more than me.
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I like it so far maybe you can give a chance to .ty translator....................................................................................
The translation is decent. The world building is like every other novel. My main problem is that the story development is way too fast. In 2 chapters, everyone went from hating him to giving him stares of acceptance. He also gains powers so fast.
Note to the author, stating what was said or that something happened takes the effect and action out of the story. Details are your friend and will help your story. also have your characters actually speak instead of saying that they spoke about something, this will add life to your story.
MC is a simp.Grammar/spelling is terrible. Novel is extreamly fast paced, It skips over a lot of details.Nothing really unique about this novel, its pretty much the same, once the MC gets some power it becomes a power reset over and over. Its pretty clear that the author doesnt have an outline of where to take his novel. its almost as if he wakes up in the morning and decides to go in a different direction everyday.
I've read up to chapter 549. The story so far is entertaining. You have epic battles, a smart MC and an interesting plot that unfolds over time. However, there is a few deal breakers. There is a disgusting amount of misunderstandings in this fic. It gets to the point that its so unbelievable that it becomes another form of plot armor. Then we got reoccurring themes. Where a battle happens, the demons are losing until the MC and his immortal army swoops in. They then proceed to steal everything, get over whelming praise for their 'sacrifices', before the gamers start to ask everyone for a mysterious quest and the MC tells a sob story for cash. This repeats itself every freaking time no matter what small arc or scenario that occurs. And finally, the thing I hate the most is how in Beta version 1.0, they have 50million people joining. What happen to it being only 50thousand? The author forgot about what he said and goes into great detail on how only the chineses are allowed to play the game and the westerners are crying about the unfairness. The westerns tried to reverse engineer the gaming capsule but they couldn't do it. Now they have to sit at home and watch the glorious chinese having fun. 'Its kinda obvious what this is hinting too' Besides all these issues, this fic is a nice time sinker. It is above the other chinese fics and on par with the gamer fics from korea. Give it a try and you'll enjoy it.Now a few issues I have with the plot. First, all the gamers are naked savages. Second, there is no defined form of leadership/control over the gamers. Third, the MC doesn't recruit anybody to his dungeon to fight for him it is only the chaotic gamers. Fourth, there is alot of foreshadowing of the MC, but nothing is ever explained until the author just wants to add random stuff to his backstory on a whim. Finally, there is no character growth what so ever.