You removed it from the voting lost entirely‽ Please release it already!??????????????????????⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐??????????
How many of you think this one will be dropped by WebNovel. If the chances of that happening are about 80%. It's very easy for trash to make it in this platform. All it needs is enough people to spend on it.
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
This is one of those rare novels that as soon as you read the first chapter you are captured and no longer free from the burning desire of opening the next page and believe me you just can't stop reading! An advice would be to increase the update frequency due to the immense potential of the Novel.
Felt too much involved in the story, and to be honest, it was so fun to read the sci-fi story. The characters were clear and interesting as the story went on, this novel is too good! highly recommended too!
wow....... if I had such luck it would be so darn amazing. it's a great novel, it's nice the way the MC is the no fucks given type since he has luck. Read the novel Ur gonna enjoy it
HELL YEAH! its finally being translated. I have been keeping up with the comics but finally!!! We are so behind but it finally translated! Also mc is super op but has very cool interesting powers.
I can see multiple problem on your story1/the story is very rushed there are multiple times skip in one chapter which removes anytime that allows you to build the world, the character et cetera.2/My second problem, the character building is non-existent even the romance is rushed .3/There is no world building The world existence I want to go from a to b that's all.4/very poor magic system Everyone has an element and you go from 0 to 9 cultivation style If you're add some of magical element from Harry Potter, the quality of the story improve a lot.5/and finally there is no core concept in the story What is the reason behind his existence? What is his goal? from what I see the protagonist only want to become stronger For the sake of being strong, he neither had an ambition or goal that make him want to be stronger is for the sake of being strong that’s all. example for goals that you can put behind your protagonist wanting to know from where comes magic /wanted to discover and research magic/ Rolling the magical world /improving the magic world , et cetera and these are simple goals You can be creative. You can add an enemy From his past and don’t make the protagonist overpowered Because if he is overpowered the story will become boring with no struggle no excitement that’s all for me.
The book is good but people who dont like the dumb idoit mc and the wierd childish vibes and All that cringy stuff this book isnt for you the catagory of the book should chqnge from games becuase doesn’t feel a game to the reader
Good novel far.Though why bother picking a novel that has been dropped?word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count
A very well done book with amazing character Interactions, plot development, and world design. There are some errors now and then bit this is not uncommon with original books either.
Needs more chapters otherwise very enjoyable