It's a copy of Lord of mysteries, but author used RPG class system fused with mystic. It's original and interesting idea. The problem is author is not doing it properly, it don't feel like 1world it feels like 2world fused forcefully. The so called mystery in this novel don't feel like mystery, its more like author is throwing a lot of unknown characters at the reader and then solve them one by one(and the concept of numbered artifact is 100% copy of LoM). So I would call it confusing characters rather than mystery plot.
I hope author don't take it wrong way. I like it!
But I just wish it could be better so I can love it.
(I hope novel with perfect fusion of RPG and Mystic of LoM happens sooner or later).
I think you can add more power like aura control for helio he can control +ions and -ions , aura is a thin laker of +ions so I think helio was able to control opponent aura and mude for a little time like make opponent sad , Scared , berserk to feared for a little while
Marvellous story.... the plot is unique with the protagonist Kayden being a hybrid of two races I didn't think i would ever see.
The story flows smoothly, the characters are intriguing and the world building as well as English and Grammar paint a fantastical picture...
Fantastic story author, you have my vote!
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Author does an amazing job of building a world, it's like reading a fascinating history book of an unknown world. doesn't waste time giving you the meat and potatoes of information and sets the scene for the world immediately.
do these people believe if they put hundreds of the same story with few differences i would read 1 of them the roman empire was different so I came here every week to see what comes next so i can know when its coming out not to see usless novels like these coming out
Being an avid reader on this platform, and video games being one of my favorite genres, I do have to say that is is one of the better books here. The pros: the world background, and the characters are quite nicely developed. Although the reincarnation trait is very overused, it is implelemted nicely in this book. Another thing is that the game also has solid mechanics, no logic holes in it, at least none that are huge. Cons: the start of the book is rather slow and chaotic, and might be hard to push through. There are small grammatical errors, and some logic holes. However, none of the cons are very large. In summary, this is a rather good book, I encourage you to read it, and I encourage the author to continue writing and updating this story.
An average novel ruined by terrible translators.
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Gracias por el capítulo ... Tal vez más tarde puedas hacer que tenga una línea de sangre, o un dragón como mascota o monta de batalla ... Jeje
A great read hopefully it gets translated.
The name doesn't really fit the book so far but it has a good store development and very stable plot no glaring holes or forgotten plot points overall a good read.