the auther tries his best to make it every thing ground breaking. right from the start.
he doesn't has experience.
I good story plot. but it is ruined by how impatient the auther was.
moreover you are really in a hurry ..the starting is messed. it destroys the taste of the reader.
rewrite that. if you want to ensure that people open their wallet for you.
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First, I would like to say that I don't have much vocabulary. I'm still an ******* and my grades in English subj were lower than you could have imagined. So some words kept repeating but I guarantee you that I've already planned this whole story. I've already had all that Arcs and the Ending in my notebook(I've wrote it there at the back of my math notebook).
I think for for those people who like reading adventures and action will like my novel. This will be a full action story... Probably...
Hais... I don't know what I was saying anymore.
Well, thanks for reading and I will accept all the criticism with open arms.
Good luck! I hope you enjoy it! I truly truly hope that you enjoy it, no, I wish that you enjoy it.
After reading till the latest (chapter 14) this I conclude that it was worth my time reading this. Although the author needs to nitpick some mishaps on the chaps. Slight edits will make it perfect. The Story was a mix of past and present scenes and also some scenes are portraying first-person narration and there are also some chaps with third-person narrations. Anyways, regardless they were enjoyable to read. The characters were round as he was not cardboard cutouts. Making mistakes were what makes this novel to spice up. Hope more chapters to come in the future. You got me hooked and invested. Hidden gem! Five stars!
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Although there is another series with a similar theme (Let Me Game in Peace), this novel is different enough to avoid "ripoff" comments. The MC is still exploring his cheat, and I'm sure it will become more useful as the story progresses. More importantly, this is a proper story with good translation and potential, unlike the hopeless trash we usually get every week. I think this one will get picked, and I'm looking forward to more chapters.
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I like this story, especially how the author named these characters ???. Anyways sometimes the words are a bit confusing but it takes time to understand.GREAT JOB!???
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