Had a stroke trying to read this
It would probably be good if the writing was edited
The idea overall is really good and I would look forward to this series if it got someone to edit it
Recomended. .
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an interesting read,
an interesting read,
an interesting read,
an interesting read,
an interesting read,
an interesting read,
an interesting read,
an interesting read.
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Nice one my dearest Chika.Please keep it up and never reliant.You have a great talent and I know you will go places.Keep up the good work and do not loose focus.
The system is strong but not broken (Yet) the power gain so far is not rushed so much that the novel is dead in 200 chapters, the characters seem to possess intelligence and are not just stupid side characters there to make the MC look smart, the MC is decently smart, not over the top but above average.The world building isn't there yet but it has potential.Overall i hope this is picked, but it's not a badly translated power fantasy so maybe it won't be picked, the name kinda lets it down and i feel that it will put people off trying this.
Quite literally a rip off of “Am I a Cultivation Big Shot” Cliches are one thing but the same story nearly chapter for chapter is borderline ridiculous. Waste your coins here if you want.
I like the story......................................................................................................................................
A good book. Of course one of the best stories ever written 5 star rating for you???????????????????? Awesome. ?????
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It is a great story. The author is not a pro, but does a great job trying to get things right. Story development is only slow because of the posting rate. World background could use a little work, but it is understandable and clear enough to give you a feeling it is there. Character development is slow but thats do to yhe chaotic nature of the character. i enjoy this book and hope it continues.