My Disappointment is Immeasurable and My Day is Ruined...................................................................................................................
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
I highly recommend this book, but if you have a weak stomach or are not ready for 18+ content then don't read this. otherwise this book is great.
Good story telling, good premise, nice punch of comedy, I recommend this if you are looking for something fresh to wash away your boredom.
"I Shall Have the Greatest PP!"
Why is there no Yandere Tag?
Hi author! you never failed to make me laugh but not in a bad way HAHAHA. The characters are so cute and stupid that's why they make me laugh. it happen that I saw your book in manggatoon and finish reading it there. why did you end it so soon author? I want more, I want to know who she choose. is there a book 2?
Shameless review but guys, please support this new novel I'm writing, it's been a few months since I've wrote again so my writing might be a bit iffy. I'm trying my best to make the chapter release as stable as I could and give the best quality I could make as to this day, I'm still an amateur to making stories.
This story is heavily inspired by Super gene as you'll see a lot of similarities of the story's background and plot. I'll try my best to not make this an hard copy of it so I'll be putting some twists and changes to avoid copyright infringement.
Overall, I think you'll enjoy this one because I out my heart and soul in writing it. I won't put too much cliche and I'll make the story as realistic as possible so please give feedback if there are any problems you find in the story.
Concept is good but the story is so slow that it becomes very irritating. .
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
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The writing quality is not bad. I loved the prologue and the intro. It was intense and heart-wrenching. But you should write "I am" instead of just writing "am..."
The characters were interesting too. You did made effort to introduce each character individually, giving them more depth. I liked the flashbacks of some characters which showed their depressing past, as it made them more 'real'.
You are doing great, and I'm sure you can improve even further!
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