I really love this book and can't wait to see how the story unfolds. [img=recommend]
Goodt novel but the writing quality is not good. This novel needs an editor and some improvement from the author's side too. [img=exp][img=exp]
This story had lots of potential until
1. author created a ridiculous plot armour that keep saving him in critical situations and the plot armour makes no sense
2. The main character have little emotion doesn’t
3. The main character is a saint who never kills those who wants to kill him
4. The academy makes no sense i feel that it holding him back he shouldn’t have join the academy
5. The story is repetitive for example there some crazy villain who are jelous of him and want to use everything in his power to destroy him but after heing defeated by the protagonist a few times the become protagonist underline which makes no sense as they have powerful backings who can literally destroy the protagonist
6. The villain are brain dead they have many ways to make mc suffer and destroy him but they chose the most idiotic way which is to fight him one by one head on
I feel like the villain can kipnap his aunt and threaten him that would make it more interesting
Well written ,but i found the tittle little unappropriate ,though he's a Scientist back then in his past life he doesn't manage to show he's knowledge , What i mean is He only depends on the system
Dropped at CH 1, this novel is incoherent rubbish. I don't know if the source material is any good or not but what I do know is that this translation is atrociously bad. I'm noticing a trend with Webnovel, they've started putting out more and more literally unreadable novels and as a reader this blatant disrespect really feels like a slap on the face.
I cannot make sense of this below MTL level translation. 0/5
Its a nice try to copy the MC of fullmetal panik and the storyline ( even if it is a little bit different). But the story is shallow as if written by EA, and the jockes are as lame as ****ing on youre girlfriend and telling her that it is a sign of love. Its like a kid who trys to play a prank, known by you and it think its funny like hell.
Just dont waste youre time, couse no on will give it back to you.
Holy crap reincarnation novel that the lover follows him? DAMN dats pretty good
Now git filled up to 140 characters
I originally started this story just because I saw the word "Harem" in its name but this quickly grew into one of my favorite stories. Even if you don't like Harem I really suggest giving it a chance you may or may not enjoy it regardless. So if you are reading this review I will only say this, Go and read the free chapters at a minimum right now! My reasons? It made me experience a roller-coaster of emotions multiple times, I even had to stop reading for a little emotional break near the end, then BlackFlamer-sama hit me with another emotional truck-kun when the story ended. Now why are you still here? Go read! Shoo shoo. Begone! start reading already. And for you BlackFlamer-Sama, hopefully wn doesn't delete this as well, refer to the gif!
All I can see is a delusional author with his twisted logic writing a poor story.. this novel has a nice start but ****ed up in the middle.. I know the novel is a fantasy but.. a fantasy still has a rule to follow or a logic to follow..
I hate you author.. **** you and your forced plot.. how come you are a high ranking author with this ****ty style of writing..
Really enjoyed this. It is like reading about a legalized murder hobo who is good at what he does.--------------------------------------------
I would like to see this get picked up
CAN U DROP MIRE CHAPTHERS PLZ HELO WHERE ARE U
This needs an editor. The story is interesting to me, but the writing quality is low. Edit the story for consistency, grammar, and spelling. Make an appendix with the power levels, so people can look a that before the chapter where the MC explains the power levels to her new students.
Also the people other than the MC will need descriptions. Names, ages, gender and power levels are all that is discussed. In order to keep track of characters I need more than that to visualize them. Otherwise the names just blur together and I can't differentiate them.