Mc has the worst qualities and is not fit to be a protagonist, he is weak-willed, he has no self confined, he can't talk to girls without stuttering.
This not minor either, he straight up went home and cried when a random girl told him to stop flipping pages quickly.
He can see he has infinite potential yet he thinks of himself as worthless.
Later on he suddenly gains a boost of confidence at random, first, he sees a high power gang doing shady stuff and makes sure to avoid them but when someone they abducted runs towards him and asks for help he helps them! willingly putting his own and his father's life in danger for a stranger.
In essence, this mc is confident at the wrong times and has low self-esteem everywhere else.
The only good thing about this story is the system and the update stability.
Very great story! It's one of that stories what I want to be real, do you know? And I don't write English very well, but the story is so good.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------Man you surprise me with this sweet story. Great work! And for the readers I just can only say try it! ---------------------------
FINALLY HERE!!! I'm gonna copy paste someone's review from NU @c600. By:criticalmind
An awesome novel. It's a kingdom building novel where the MC becoes a duke and starts reforming his territory with universal education, science and abolishing slavery etc. At the same time, he's fighting against evil cults, the church, various nobles and preparing for armageddon (Read the story for more details). It reminds me quite a bit of Release that witch except for the lack of romance and the fact that most of the rules of science are not the same and have to be rediscovered.
The MC is likeable, actually uses whatever knowledge he has. He's not completely OP and depends on a large number of people. He uses his brain far more often than his predecessor's supposedly legendary strength.
The other characters are memorable and well developed. There are a few 'genius' characters who turn his ideas into reality and even improve upon them quite a bit. The antagonists are quite smart. Their actions are more or less logical and they actually win some of the time.
TL;DR An awesome, must read, kingdom building, tech building, political and action novel with a lot happening and a well written cast of characters.
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good story
bad backward review
but i like the move of the book could create
please make sure to not let the readers think its 2 book in one book . make it slow and fast but dont do a backward dream befor it make any sens or befor u make it like backward .
I like how the story is developing, it was slow but progressive.
A good plot, but I need time to say for sure how the story progresses. If Author-san releases more chapters, we can enjoy the continuous read.
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Gosh! ! why did they cut the chapters back to 40! I still want to read! !! !! ???????????????????????????????????
Too many references ..But i Am in love with this novel and the way it’s progressing ......,............................,,, ...,..............
Pretty cute story with action and guild building, sexual frustration, and a whole bunch of other things. Story has been interesting so far, will keep reading.
Writing Quality: 3/5 Your writing is not bad but you have a few problems with punctuation, and a bit unnecessary wording. Updating Stability: 5/5 I put everyone's like this. Story Development: 4/5 The pacing of your story is good, please keep up with that. I like the plot developing, although I did tend to get a bit bored at times, but it did not stop me from fully leaving. Character Design: 3.5/5 (I have to round to four on the thing) I feel the MC to be a bit bland, but not all the bad as a character. I do like the other characters you added and how you give their personality through their dialogue. World Background: 4/5 I enjoyed the first chapter the most in the sense of world building, you did a good job at painting a picture on your world. In conclusion, the story is not bad, it is interesting but at the same time could get a bit boring. But getting past the boring part, the story is good. Keep up the good work, author.