A story that is plucked out of the ordinary. The uniqueness pulls any readers deep into the story. A simple and friendly writing style that won't confuse any readers at the same time can give subtle information.
This is one of the great masterpiece. Splendid job author! Keep up the good work!
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Firstly, the writing quality is above average, the humour being a nice touch.
Secondly, The story developent is amazing, alrhough background and description of the surrounding area as well as shock factor from transmigration can be improved.
Since my second point comes close to the subject of world building, I will address the world background. Although the qi and spiritual points were addressed, I feel like explanations on the jobs of shaman can be addressed too. Additional information on different qi levels could be addresed so as to know the setting (ie. cultivation world) better. Elaborating on the positions in the sect which XY’s father is the head of would be great too. Different creatures and the grading of items can also be elaborated on.
Since world background also touches o character design, this webnovel is quite good at that. Although, as with any other webnovel, there are some slight problems in understanding the charaxter of XY’s siblings and who is eldest, et cetera.
Lastly, UPDATING STABILITY. If you came for chapters, mass releases and similar, you will be disappointed. This book has not updated in 5 months (at this time) and most likely will not update for a long time.
I pray that the author will release more chapters soon.
AHHHH, who the hell am I kidding. I am doing this on my phone a week after GRADUATING EXAMS. I AM BEGGING RHE AUTHOR, PLEASE UPDATE FOR MY SANITY, THIS BOOK IS *GNIQUF* AMAZING SO...
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Great start author!
Highly recommended this book, the story flows well and the descriptions are innovative and creative.
Characters are likeable and humorous.
Keep up the hard work author!
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so after reading the first 7 chaps I concluded one thing that is: This novel has lot of potential I'm not going to talk about world background and that boring stuff as the novel had just started But for the first chaps I think that they were great,great writing style action that boils my blood and that makes me want more chaps faster(even thought there is no action at the start read it and you will understand) anyways when I read 50 chaps I will redit this post so that I give you my review (even though nobody care *sadface*).
Its seems to be a cross between pubg battle royale and a power fantasy max power system story! I throughly enjoyed it and hope the webnovel team picks it for continued tramslation!
I like the story but hate when people use races words on each other . I hope someday everyone can help each other save the planet for the next generation who live the future . Also will he help save the Amazon rainforest and Africa and other Countries save the animals and plants too !!!
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