the story is great with minor grammatical mistakes,tho it will greatly promote your novel if u can add the tag,i will give more elaborate review after that.
This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
This novel is my favorite by far and never fails to put a smile on my face with how silly it can be. However, when push comes to shove it can really hit you with the feels. The author lulled me into a false sense of security with the lighthearted comedy but as things develop I become increasingly worried that things will end in tragedy. But without stakes and a realistic possibility of loss how can you truley have a tense situation.
Congrats, you managed to merge two of my favorites novels, author (TBATE and Solo Leveling)
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The vibe this story makes is very interesting, and I really like it. It makes it feel sort of neo-noir, a science fiction type for me. I really like that, I really do.
Ahhhh omg author I’m so proud I stopped readying this to let chapters pile up and that was when you have around 500k and now you have 1.1 Million you totally deserve it. This is as amazing novel?
Wasted potential.Although by name you might think that there are 2 protagonists, in fact 65% of the chapters are about Male Lead, 30% about Male and Female Leads together and only 5% about Female Lead. And the hidden gem is in that 30% tandem part. When they try to play mind games against each other. When they undergo personal growth. That part is more than Ok. 5/5.Alas, 2/3 chapters of novel is spent on ML solo battles, training and adventures. And they're just not interesting, because ML is a typical protagonist. A system with quests. Revenge. The second personality. Training. A monstrous talent. Helps everyone in trouble. We've seen it all more than once and it's incredibly boring. 2/5.In general, the work could have been much better if, instead of Action, the author had spent more time on Psychological aspect of work
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Great I love history and always wanted to read a reincarnation or transmigration in our history and this is exactly what I was waiting for, please translate!!!!
BRO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK OF WRITING THIS AWESOME NOVEL
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*this is god tier cover art I tell you author better not change the cover* and so yeah from what I've read it is indeed about mc transmigrating into the past and a game ai pretty much takes over the world like skynet from terminator but luckily it's a game system and not a defense system like skynet so the game system makes all currencies obsolete exept online currency of its game wont spoil too much guys just go and read it