First of all thanks for all the hard work. lets star by basics:Writing Quality "4"- Its good to see all author comments inside chapters its funny it suits the story well. Grammar is nice and it keep you to read all that u actually wrote and not just scroll trow it like in some other novels your`s actually keep me to read it normally so that big plus.Stability of Upadate "4"- Would be nice to keep it stable of 7chap/week but its proly hard for you with school and other irl stuff so i wont say much just that i would be nice to see more chapters :D <3Story Development "4"- Its a cool concept of cultivation in modern time with a sprinkle of comedy and you`r combing it quite nice. Keep up the good work with that.Character Design "4"- Would be nice to see more complex or more depth characters. But still your doing nice job for now and i like it.World Background "3"- Cant give more for real. I will for sure give more later on when more things are introduce but still imo you should put more job in this place. Ill give some examples: You named the universe and realms and i know we will find out that later on but still is he now on planet or some pagoda flying in space? All i recall reading he woke up after leaveing earth but i dont get where is he now. I know its his master place but is it a planet or spaceship ;D Maybe i missed it somehow not sure. Also try writing on paper make a map of a world in ur mind. The with that u can see background of things more stadly and work on a story from that point of view. It will be maybe easy`r for you to move from there if u got blocked. Tho imo your doing really nice job for now and i really like the book. For everyone else who is reading i give big suggestion to start reading this novel if u havent and support author somehow . Its damn good read and its really nice change of pace of common MC type of OP/EZ KILL ALL etc... this one is damn special and amusing and i like him alot. Keep up the good work man ;) Best regards Salcho
I've been waiting for months for atleast a single release and look what I got, its just depressing that one of my first and favorite novel actually died. The novel is good with one of the best plots or story I've ever seen, its a pity that the translator no longer releases chapters anymore as this was actually in my list of top 5 novels. All in all, I suggest you don't read this as it just makes you sad and annoyed (lol jk read it I recommend you do) the story is good and thats it, there are many more good aspects in this novel but Im too lazy. That's all.
it's back and with better translation this time pretty acceptable .......................... ............................ ..........................
I like this. Even though its cliche, I like the flirt, invincibility and harem. Compared to other sign-in novels, which mc is eunuch or a scared man, who hides his strength and virgin, this much better. way better. better if this is a 18+ novel.
Honestly one of the best books I've found on here. Characters with depth, interesting developments. a lot of elements make it seem more real and down to earth. if you are looking for an enjoyable positive read. this is it.
Finished the Story. Lots of Spoilers.This story has few things going for it but many things against it. The story is 5(?) story written by the author and is probably the latest one. The story was completed just 5 months ago. And this brings us to the problem. How can author with such experience write such a poor story?It's short and fast but the story itself is neither funny nor intresting enough to keep your attention.Pros :1: With 660 chapters it's a pretty short Xianxia and System Novel.2: It has slight comedic elements.3: It's a system novel.Apart from these three I couldn't find any reason to read this story.Cons :1: MCs character is highly one dimensional and conflicting. His behaviour changes with his mood. One moment he is preaching peace and the next he is destroying a whole sect and murdering everyone from the Ancestor to new recruits.2: His motive to gain power is poor. The whole story is poorly executed. Power so he can relax and enjoy? Okay. But here you are trying extremely hard to do so when you could have done it through way simpler methods.3: Lots of plot holes, incomplete story lines and half way buildup. Whether it's the flame tatoo he gets after killing a Buddhist Sect Ancestor or is the Dark god realm. Same way, it's not explained properly whether the Alliance is from other dimension, is one the same planet but just divided by a barrier or they from another planet. It just doesn't makes any sense. Similarly, what exactly is that nine headed bug? Way too many incomplete story lines.4: Cultivation system is shabby? Incomplete? Hastily made? I have no idea what to say. Almost all cultivation novels have becoming God as an end point. Here, it's not so. His strength makes him the strongest but the cultivation realm is not so. Their are many people in the same cultivation level. Thats it 5: The way he earns anger is through thrash talking. There are so many ways he could have earned anger. Vandalism, pranking, stealing...but no, the only way he thinks to do so is through the thrash talk.6: System. It basically converts anger points to cultivation attributes. But it's not expanded upon. It's origin, it's end, its function. Nothing. Above all, after few chapters author just makes up some anger point number to suit his requirements.All ina ll. Poor story.
absolutely do not read.Either author or translator made a lot of mistakes. All you have to look at is description:Strength: When you are not fighting, you will slowly regain 1% of your health.Age Gracefully: Every year you live, you gain Defense +1. Strength ? you regain health ???????? It makes no sense. There is more -> its wrong!! MC doesn't have this skill, he gains +1 Defense every time he takes damage, not by every year. Even description of novel is wrong. MC gets bloodthirsty GU, 5 chapters later this GU is called Meateating GU .....not worth anyone's time.
It sucks that it will only let me rate this 5 stars. This novel is at least 6/5. It breaks the bound of a mortal book and has become a divine one. This is my gospel. To read this novel was the reason I was birthed on this earth. Amazing, simply amazing.
This webnovel is very nice . It starts off quite slow and a little confusing especially with the double names of the protagonist. But later on in the novel it starts to get interesting and substance is slowly added to the novel. If your looking for a book that is fast paced straight from the start than this novel isn't for you but if your looking for a novel that you can fall in love with slowly or at a normal pace this is perfect for you. The author is very nice and considerate and seems very dedicated and the story goes at a pace that can't be called slow but can't be called fast either.
Raw :长生不死的我只练禁术.................
Really very boring. This novel falls under a sub-genre that I like to call 'pinnacle wish-fulfillment'. The way this genre works is that the our MC basically gets everything he ever wants and beats anyone who happens to get on his way, splendidly and with 1 hand behinds his back I might add.People like this type of books because they enjoy the feeling of superiority they get when relating to the MC, it's pretty exhilarating feeling when the character you're relating to slaps someones face and completely shames them for their inadequacy- perhaps totally proving their belief systems wrong. Think books like 'A Valiant Life' or 'Elixir Supplier'. It's just slapping faces or getting that satisfaction from being better and/or right.The obvious issue with this genre is that since everything has basically been set in stone for our guy well what is there to read anymore? Our MC will win and slap faces, nothing ever really happens; its just same situations repeated of him always winning and getting beautiful girls left and right. Well not quite, normally that is.Usually in this type of books the route the author takes is something like wish-fulfillment+comedy (in form of parody) and sometimes even satire towards the main genre which here would be xianxia. Sure they might throw some more serious content in here and there but basically it's just really fun and enjoyable asspulls from our MC then either some slice of life type content or adventuring.So why is this book boring then? That would be because in this story there were all the elements of success except 1, the comedic undertone. Here its just a guy taking over someones body, immediately becoming peerlesly talented, getting girls left and right and slapping faces. Without the comedy aspect it becomes a serious story and as a serious story it has no hook or anything for anyone to want to keep reading it because the conclusion of the book as already set.Most handsome in the world? Check. Most talented in the world? Check. Fastest cultivator in the world? Check. Many beautiful girls falling for him on sight? Check. I could keep going. Its just ridiculously bad. Everything MC does here is perfect and will always succeed. That's why this isn't worth my time.
A great novel full of character. It’s simply a amazing read making me smile and laugh reading through it all. I recommend this to you all and hope you can push this through trial read to the voting pool. However unlikely, this novel is great and deserves some attention