The first time when i give 5* ... i think ? Good story, genial idea, or at least I haven't read this kind of plot until now, very funny. Keep up the good job, and maintain the vibe.I love the personality of the sis ? I hope you have read the Book of the Authors, are quite a few tips and tricks there.
Easy 5 star fot this novelIf you want lots of snu snu, harem, some plot, a lot of PLOT then this is for you Update stability is really good that i can say after 100 chapterSo dont wait and jump in onto the ship
This is a very interesting adventurous story of children written without any grammatical errors,I appreciate the author for including the suitable literary techniques according to the story and making it more interesting and readable.
So I've read some of it, and this guy need a proof reader or an editor to fix the glaring text errors, the him/her and I/them/you are just a couple of the most obvious examples where the authors meaning in describing the who/what/how situation is happening is confusing and/or contradictory to what the author intended?If those errors can be fixed then this may be a decent story, until then it feels like a somewhat machine translated story ?
I'll be replying here because I want others to see this as well. So.I've been like writing my second book, That's HUNTERS ROYALE. and it's way better than this, both in story development and grammar. I hope you guys could give it a try. I want you guys to see this because I've been recruiting readers to my discord as character creators. Yes, it means, you can create a character of your own for my second story, and trust me it's awesome!!. Because you also get to choose the MC side of the antagonist side, and the powers over there are way more different, and yes the MC ain't lame and stupid like the beginner Marcus. ?please give it a try, I believe you guys won't regret it. I hope you meet some of you guys over there.
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I like how the author did a separate POV chapters seeing another person perspective or the protagonist perspective.The story seems great, so I'll continue reading, please don't drop… ?
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Finally, we have "Buddha's palm" among us.The true Ancestor of Sign-in and grand novel. well because I read this novel in the raws, I'll tell you something that this novel is great. a truly good one. as the story goes on we will see better and better chapters and great background in this novel and everything will become more and more fantastic. the MC is one of the best mc among all the novels that we had read to this point in our lives and I truly expect that this great novel will be selected and continued for translation.
I just giving five star for MC laziness . . It's looks interesting but it's pick or not, that's the big problem.... Anyways, just make it bit comedy!! I love mostly because life very dull .. ?
Its a little bland for me(own opinion), It felt bland for me because of how many times I have read novels like this.I felt that when I stop reading ill stop forever type of thing that could easily get bored at.Also some part of the chapters I felt I have read before in another novel.
Next Chapter, please!!!