This is a really great book with the theme of magic and isekai which I appreciate so very much. I like how the MC makes so many reliable friends and I also like how he has the drive to become stronger by all means possible
Over all the story is amazing. The author could definitely improve on world development, but the story line and character development is on point. A great book so would definitely recommend.
I'm leaving this review because I actually think the concept for my story is pretty solid. Basing the story during the modern day, and seeing how fictional creatures and ideas react with the modern world is cool. I'm also going to try to improve my writing quality with each chapter.
Finally find it this novel so much frustration trying find this uhhhh... web novel fix the problem bug certain novels not popping up correctly
This novel (a gem by the way) disappeared from trial read even though it was not picked.
Did the translation get permanently axed?
Such a shame.
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.
I love reading it very much when I'm free.
every story plot in all the chapter is great and good.
I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.
I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work.
Thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.
Well, decent story, I gave this story average of 3.8 * for this story...
Well, I really like the concept and world-building of this story, the story is interesting and the characteristic of the character also strong, but here is the thing that bothers me and makes me less enjoy when reading this story
1. The author really wants the misunderstand troupe of MC is weak from bystander continue, we'll I know it is to drive the plot but continuing it for a long time is annoying. Moreover the build-up each time when people offend the MC isn’t get paid by the conclusion, aka, the conclusion is not really satisfying...
2. I know that the MC is a kind hero before, but how he reacts and doing something is really annoying, like what the purposes of hiding his identity when you literally always blurted out his identity as master... And the stupidity why he hides his strength...
3. Less screentime of MC’s slice of life, I mean I am interested in this story because the title and the synopsis also tag make me want to read about MC slice of life as retired OP HERO... But his slice of life time is so little here, also what got us hooked about this genre, like face slapping etc isn’t included here, just like I said above, the author introduced many xianxia’s cliche arrogant character here, but the conclusion after they offending the MC is not satisfying.
My favorite part of this story
1. When MC’s become preschool’s teacher
2. How he interacts with children and coax them
3. Worldbuilding and mystery of how his first world and earth connected
4. Side character building is really good
Suggestion from me:
1. You can’t just think about the plot, also thinking what you want us as readers to feel, take time to think of what you want the reader to feel in each arc, chapter, or even sentence.
2. Although the characters beside MC is interesting, MC is really annoying, so if it doesn’t change the main plot, please make him change his annoying character.
3. When there is character offend the MC, please make satisfying conclusion of it.
4. I have something in my mind but I don’t know how should I say it, lol. I’ll update the review when the time comes...
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Well, I honestly think that this story has a lot of potential. It kinda reminds me of beggining after the end with a bit of differences here and there. Anyways, Goodluck author, keep it up!
? the first chapter is ????? that drunken s*x amnesia hit DIFFERENT. The grammar is delicious. I ain't seen one mistake so far. muy bien! Also I'm kinda simping for lily??
Woah! I was skeptical since I often read female leads more often, but this isn't that bad at all! The plot was interesting and detailed. The characters are well thought out. Despite not having been as interested from the synopsis, I'm rather hooked onto it!