Wow this novel is really good and I also love the world building and idea development of this book. keep it up author ??......................
Its alright, but not great.
The translation is good, and there are no problems in the grammar.
However, one of the characters in the book is Kobe Bryant, who is portrayed very differently to how i imagined him to be, and more like what a chinese author would think him to be.
Slightly unrealistic in some of the world building aspects, and about 8 chapters and 2 months in, i srill dont know the names of the MCs family, or anything about the MCs family.
6.2 out of 10
if you want to read nerfed mc whom after his power has been unsealed, it was sealed again for no reason, this is for you. If you have read atg, it's like yun che of past life live again in floating cloud city, his poison pearl is sealed for no reason. instead of become stronger as time pass by, mc becomes weaker. author decided to nerf him down even more as time pass by for no reason. all the characters are stupid and one dimensional naive idiots. mc doesn't have goals and there's no clue when his power would recover. all depends on author. he will unseal his power at whim and seal it again at whim for no reason. So yeah, his age becomes much older but compared to his peers from his immortal world, he's just trash at this age and now he's just wasting it away in this place for no solid reason except from author pulling things out of his a ss.
The characters are bland, mc kinda dumb, logic doesnt always hold up. I can’t really get immersed in this story, which makes it a bad read for me.
I don't know what to say ....
how the hell we going to find who's npc and who's player
the one star missing from world background you could have done better
2. you explain whats happening like if there is players or not etc why the hell there many missing things inside novel for example
you could have for every character (player/npc) you could have made stats for them like
(any name)
gender
npc or player
health / mana etc.
there is no need for skills ....
just basic stats doesn't take 3 or 4 line to do
to make easier to understand the plot
story its OK etc
summary or conclusion it will be 100% better if you put introduction
like confused what's happening in novel
I have maybe read 17 chapters (when you read its very confusing)
other than that it very excellent
as you cans see from other reviews
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I've never enjoyed a fanfic so much as I have enjoyed this one, the way the history is handled, the implementaion of lore that we don't really see in the movies, the WoW thing caught me by surprise but it was a welcome one (See what I did there?
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petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
The endless ocean, dark tunnels, and now we have misty island survival.
You know the rules and so do I.
MC is a perfect example of generic.
He got his cheat that tells him about everything, follows its advice and boom, profit.
He goes on to build a water purifier and becomes a water mogul.
Sounds familiar doesn't it?
There's nothing unique so far except the fact that it's a bunch of misty islands this time.
However, one thing to note is that he got a pet. Instead of naming this pet using the regular naming scheme of Little ____. he used "Big" instead, how disgusting who is this person? How dare he spit on our generic traditions.
Great novel keep it up author.Also I like your other novel so update that too...............................................................
Very Good chapters, and funny............thanks ..............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..
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