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Go forth and speak softly, but carry a big stick.
Overall good read
The world is interesting, with characters that draw you in deep into the plot. I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes the story next!
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Started of really good but quickly turned extremely bad. In the beginning the novel was going in a good direction. He lives alone is a weeb and seems to know what he's doing. Nothing wrong with that but then the system forces him to go out and explore the real world
In first chapters it was fine. He just walked around and visited famous places to get special talents from them. We also quickly learned that the supernatural existed in the real world and then the author suddenly decides to focus more on the real world than the Mc's simulations.
While traveling the Mc encounters something supernatural he needs to start fighting it and shortly after his fight the government finds out about his powers. And as in all Chinese novels the Mc quickly becomes slave to the government.
But if I go back to the simulations. The simulations themselves are pretty good but the Mc's reactions aren't. He holds grudges against people for what they did inside the simulations. He also becomes more stupid with time but the author tries to make him seem smart.
If that isn't enough to make you read it then you should know that he doesn't actually transmigrate even after 200 chapters.
In conclusion I would not recommend this novel to anyone.
Bah! What sort of trashy forced plot is this. For the next few days I’m going to do a mandatory 1 star review to spite webnovel for picking this trash!
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Alright I haven't read all the chapters out rn but I have to say I really like it so far. The characters are interesting to read about, and aren't flat 2d characters with no personality. The story isn't boring or longwinded, and can still keep my attention for chapters at a time. I haven't seen an obvious grammar or spelling mistake so far. The creme de la creme of this story for me is the monster mc I just love that sort of thing!
Keep up the great work author!!! q(≧▽≦q)
Read 30 chapter And no mention Of fusion.
for now.
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why?
harem tag.
lit af 10/10 me want more
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i generly dont review this early, but from the authors other work, and the start of this one, i can say its gonna be really good and special. its an intresting take on vamp stories, give it a try.