I’m starting to really enjoy this book,dont drop it I’m looking forward to finishing this..
Really a Good Novel , Please Continue the history i really loved this system novel , i just wait alot of chapters -___- , please post quickly , I Really Recommend This Novel .
You've joined my #Top 3 author group. The story is developed better than I can comprehend
Excellent fight scenes. The fight is actually what brought me in, even though there are a slight bit of writing errors, the author made sure to keep us hooked up with his story. The background of the story is simple and best.
But the only thing I would say is that from the next time, make sure you give a slow start to your novel.
All the best author.
I just really don't find this story to be gripping in any way and it feels too shallow and like story that has already been told thousands of times. I don't know why I keep getting this recommended to me, but I'm really not personally interested in it.
The story is good. The character's are likeable. But my one problem is the name selection. The title 'Maid's secret' is kinda overused and I probably saw similar titles. It is something that make good books getting lost among others. Other than that, not bad.
Me likey. Seems like an easy going book but fun whist I like and seems like the mc is op in money sens. hope there isnt faceslapping and Hope for more chapters
Finally, I'm here to drop a review that came directly from my... touchscreen device.
The intro was a bit interesting- introduction of the character and his prowess before the official start of the work.
The writing quality is great for someone who's native language isn't English, and the book's design is great.
Although they are some minor errors, they do not affect the book's flow. The plot is great and starting chapters hooking.
Good job man, hope you continue to release more amazing chapters!
Beautiful story, and character description. the setting is also good. Love a good vengeance story.
it' a great novel, but author can you tell me, why have you it stopped updating
Writing Quality : I must say it was quite good on the first few chapters but no, grammar, spelling, it was all bad. Your way of writing is also very chaotic. You keep changing perspective per perspective, leave plots hanging, you leave to much information which sometimes becomes redundant. You need to bring this all together.Story Development : It was very good for you make Moku your mc with it based on your synopsis, but you made a bad move, you change thr main characters perspective to another. And also you cant't justify you word of making in as record of the orc civilization because halfway through the novel you change perspective to human development, history and all that, which give me irked. Its not even story anymore, its a book of description. The later chapters focus more on information dumps which Is very unlikable. Character Design : I dont't even know what to say, abandoning first main character perspective and just leaving it on the plot armour disgust me, I hate it. Authors like you are incompetent.Updating Stability : No CommentWorld Background : Clear and unclear at the same time. You give too much details but not description, you're writing is more of whats going on, not what it is or whatever it was.REMARKS: Anyway you probably fattened your chapters because money, idk what to say. But your writing needs more improvmement. If this is your first book then congrats, your grammar and english might not be much but atleast you bring a world for us readers not like those out-of-spite novels. I wish you good luck in your next book. And if you want to be a great writer, webnobel might not be for you, money shackles the mind Author. Thankyou.
A fun reading, a little confusing sometimes, but it's not a problem at all, you can feel that the author is excited about the story by the way he writes too. this genre is not much my style, but i had fun reading it.