Good story with an “omg this MC is a idiot”. For a while he is a smart MC with luck with the ladies then he can’t figure crap out a few chapters later. And it’s really bad and obvious. Author leaves giant plot holes all over the place and the MC doesn’t seem to remember anything from more than 3 chapters before. Save your time it becomes crap after a while
The story has a unique beginning that we dont see alot in story's it shows creativity of the author I recommend to read this it's really good so far even though it has a system the mc dosent have a OP start where he can rule the world and it shows that he isn't cocky.
One of the worst novels i have ever read in my life. Absolutely disapointing.
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One of the worst novels i have ever read in my life. Absolutely disapointing.
Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed.
By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters.
Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage.
If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go.
Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.
This novel has done several things that makes it great.
1st the introduction makes since , is reasonable,established the mc purpose and avoids standard cliches that I have grown to find irksome bc I know these cliches usally lead the mc in these novel having hollowes desires such as desiring power bc my clan discarded me excedra which usually quickly becomes irrelevant and kinda of bland.
2nd The system is great
I like the fact that the system isnt solely focused on his on development, and to be hounest I'm a bit tired of reading system novels were the mc drools over option that will make them super powerful. It aspects like this that breaks the balance if novels and makes me question indivduals IQs. So for that concentration of power to be lacking is refreshing.(as side the system is kind of sassy/funny and I am aware that as a system novel the mc does have a huge advantage over others)
3rd the world building is decent
I understand the dynamics of the world he is reincarnated into, the characters arent one noted cliches, and there quite a few characters that are still being explored developed. and since this is a new novel that's bound to have alot of recurring characters it's only in the nature of the setting to .take time to develop.
ultimately I would recommend this novel eventhough it might not make you fall in love with automatically, it certainly wont cause you to blow a gasket
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you just stole this, the actual novel is at nearly 550 chapters and is extremely good would recommend. Shame on you for taking this it is a disgrace to the site and you..
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I am reading this book for quite sometime now. .I really enjoy the book.I hope this book this book goes on and on. The story is getting improved with every chapter.ENJOY
This book just keeps getting better and better, I don't usually enjoy a lot of thrillers mostly because I get scared, but I'm so intrigued by the story that I can't drop it. ? to the writer.
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