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This one is actually decent. Best in the batch at least.
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Мне понравилось, очень интересно и классно, практически не видел таких фанфиков про попаданца с силой санс, продолжай в том же духе.
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Everything just kept me looking forward to what is next. Starting from the title itself. All I can say is the storyline Is great and believe this is going to be a great one in time to come. Keeping going author
I haven't read the book but the reviews are chaotic. Im sorry author. i can see that you cared for the book and feel hurt when someone insults your creation, I feel you. Dumb readers everywhere. Same with the authors. I honestly like that you reply to people. It shows that you keep up to date on everyone's comments. It's okay to reply back, don't ignore them but its better to be more careful and professional with words. Hope you have a comeback and return with a better book (cuz based from the reviews, they do not like it) Good Luck to you author. It's hard being an author right? They don't see ththe endurance, effort and creativity of the mind to formulate plots, make up characters and create the word.Again, Good Luck.
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I decided to read a few chapters of this book to see what's the fuss all about but only a few chapters cuz I can't stand being in a novel full of toxic comments. Not your fault.
Also The 5 stars are for the next novel you create, hope it turns out good. Would love to read a book from an author with your kind of principles.
the novel is worth a try its pretty good.the character is naive but reasonable because of his last life,the lack of interaction,experience, and being isolated in community makes a good reason for lacking in common sense,it will be great in future character development.but the skills and system is to op,you should tone it down.
Make your character grow smarter his decision making should sound reasonable,his planning in solving problems,and you should include his future plans for his grow in power ,dont make him a retard in later chapters its a big no no.and the kings garden you should develop it make it a fortress like asgard make a kingdom building genre. so far it is good,good luck on your novel
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The story is complex enough to make you hooked and mystified by it. I can sense that this work was well thought out and I am happy to say that it has quality. The story also progresses nicely that I am thrilled to read chap to chap. Kudos for a job well done!
The main character is a crybaby, he can't solve his problems by himself. He needs the help of other people to solve his problems...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It is a really good read, i love the story outline, it's like one of those classics. I also like the concept of Artras and their already chosen destiny, over all it is a really good story with lovely growing characters.
Need more chapters and faster
Bored of reading about humans? Then you have come to the right place. Follow the journey of Liam, a halfling, in this book. Just a few chapters in but the author keeps you hooked. I am sure you will not be disappointed!!