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im still waiting for the update even though it's seem like it's impossible now it's been 2 years now....if fate comes again i will reread it
Your novel has grabbed me from the first moment, I can't wait to see more chapters and enjoy them. I hadn't read in this App for a while, but now I know what to entertain myself with.
Continue.
Bro this is my favourite, i liked the powel scale in the one piece verse of this fic its amazing. ive read too many ”cliche” one piece fanfictions but this one blew my mind with all the suprises i shed a couple tears with xebec and the duo
This is a novel about a guy who transmigrates to the body of a sect master of a destroyed sect. He is reborn with a sect building system that is based on a (mobile?) game he played in his previous life. Unfortunately the author chose to write the novel in the style of making the main character look cool is more important than the story and world building. Even just looking at the free chapters it is already clear that thr plot armor is far stronger than that of most novels in the genre. It goes so far that world building doesn't always make sense with what the mc does and very often motivations for actions taken by characters is questionable. And even though the author tries to make it look like the mc can be in danger but bc the plot armor is so obvious there is never any suspense about the mc winning or losing a fight. In some fights the author even just straight up says the opponent, who is a major realm stronger than the mc, cannot win before the fight even starts. This novel can also be explained as a not so original idea delivered with mediocre writing quality and storytelling. Having said that I have also seen many novels who done far worse but don't have expectations when reading this, it is a time filler at best.
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To be honest, I didn't have the highest expectations when I was reading this. Turns out, personally I find that reading this is way more enjoyable than most post apocalyptic scenarios I've read.
The MC is naturally a overpowered killing machine from the start of the story, he meets new people throughout but right now I barely see much development of the characters as we progress. The most I see is their basic backstories of why they are here or "Oh no! How will we survive? We can't let MC carry us, etc" I hope that as I get further into the story we would further expand on backgrounds of characters and their past lives.
Another thing to mention is the writing quality, some sentences are badly written missing proper grammar (Barely Readable, hope you fix it or find a editor lol), with the cliche enemy rises because MC didn't finish him off and he becomes stronger trope (but at least he is strong enough to pull off situations and look bad ass,). If you can ignore these aspects of this novel and looking for a new zombie type of novel definitely try it out.
Meh, super cliché on the first chapter, with super poor editing and translation. Honestly, worse than MTL. At least the editing should be readable no matter how ****ty the story is.
The opening is so cliché, on the same bed as engaged famous CEO beauty with 'hidden illness that only Great Me can miraculously cure with BS medical knowledge'.
Ignoring the fact that he was transcendental being got ambushed and somehow reincarnate cliché, the outline of the story is quite bleak. What's next? Arrogant young master who despises peasants? Ex-GF who broke up with him for being good-for-nothing? Stupid clan head who knows nothing about stop and reconcile? Unbending police waman who tried to frame MC at everything? Troublesome High schooler? 'Chinese are trash' JP mob? 'We are better' Indian crowd? 'world hegemon' USA? Etc. Etc. Etc.
And treasure? 'Oh, I found it accidentally on the flea market' space ring? 'as many as weed' herbs? Notebook talismans?
From the techniques, it has to be either "my previous one is good, but...hidden technique that I accidentally found in ancient ruin which I cannot cultivate due to BS" or 'my previous technique is out of imagination cool'
Tell me, which one of these are not there?
The clan he built and the characters I cared about just died like that because of his stupid decision haaaah and then the cliche where there are stronger than him during his heyday it would still be interesting even without those stupid cultivation cliches but no, the author decided that the omnipotent dad is not so omnipotent but just an arrogant senile old man
Honestly, the thing that draws people to read this novel is the fluffy scene(barely) and the character development sadly the novel turned into I'm the strongest but there are stronger out there so I will head out to get stronger again and there are mysterious characters which are not so mysterious at all and aren't even interesting at all and lastly the title should be changed he wasn't omnipotent at all he was incompetent honestly.
I read up to about chapter 28, but I just couldnt buy the characters choices. He gets roped into becoming a drug dealer or worse, his bouncer, for no reason at all. He's the land lord, and he's in the position to be a witness, and he's the kid with no motive. Anything happens to him and it's all over for that guy. He's got the power, but he caves like a total beta, yet it's clear that's not where the author wants to go with the MC. It looks like the author wants the MC to become some, raging, alpha, badass from the 80' or 90's who smokes, deals drug, drives a bike, and bangs girls that look and act like hookers. Sorry, even if it made sense, it doesn't, that's not actually so cool. Cool wouldn't have to try so hard to look cool.
Rating: 3.8 star
Writing quality: 5 star
Nothing to talk about, very good written, especially the prologue.
Stability of updating: 5 star
Actually wanted to give 1 star, but since author showed 0 chapter/week means he did what he promised.
Story development: 4 star
The story is very well developed. We get information about the world slowly, not too much and not too little. It’s just enough making the story easy to follow.
Character design: 1 star
This is the point which destroyed the whole story.
It’s fine to make main character coward, ignorance or pushover etc. But it’s not fine to make main character stupid or a liar.
World background: 4 star
Very well done on the world building. Very creative and promising.