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The chapters are to long, I have to scroll down for hours just to finish a paragraph. You should reduce at least 69% of the word counting to make it enjoyable.
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the book is really nice,one of the first books that I read and I'll never forget the sensation I was feeling while reading.It was awesome
I just finished the book, and sadly I was 6hours late to the party. Nonetheless all I want to say is that its a very solid read for the most part but I cant help but feel that it ended too abruptly. I had a bad premonition that it was ending when the speed mc advanced when on timewarp mode, but boy is it sad to see this novel go. Logical but not the snartest mc ever, reasonable side characters tho they tend to be forgotten later on, understandable world building with much left to be discovered as it was an open ending, and a good translation to boot (except for cough, the earlier chaps) - thats abt how Ill describe this novel
Too much patriotism and racism in the novel. A trash one, read any other novel as this one is filled with cliche after cliche. Very definition of a copy paste novel .
Chapters are VEry short. messy plots and issues. Also i just gotta point out, super rich guy who is bedding several hot ladies still not happy with his life and wants more woman so he can be more awesome??? Like WTH??
it's alright. don't come into this expecting great writing and characters. just something to pass the time with. a somewhat godlike mc due to his system and transmigration.
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All I can say is...
ᥬThe author of this story didn't hide MC's stupidity for the whole 40 chaps or more. It shows he's such an honest person.☯︎
This novel description seems very much interesting
I don't think it's right to talk about God or religion that way I think it's blasphemy so I don't advice to read this work and I hope for the author to delete it
I am leaving five stars cause I like the ancients world and hope that this can be just as good anyways I hope they can live up to the high expectations i have of it
