I'm in suspense dear author . This book is really mysterious, just what I need.
Shameless Author review my last novel was a dude because while I could imagine and plan out later arcs the beginning was too hard to right. This one will be different so try and stick for the ride.
First of all, it sucks that you didn't explain the world more, although yes you explained about the hiearchy system and thats it! You didn't even explain in detail if there is magic or simalr thing! There is a 'identification stone' and the first thing I thought I you would do is make MC learn about this kind of stuff better and the world he got in better but no you write many chapters with MC having s** like wtf dude the title is even culinary but the first thing you focused on is MC and his love interests being intimate not cooking not food and not searching for more information and the MC is an idiot - its okay to tell about business strategies and law and policies to the baron, his father but production of new products, the f*** you should just have the MC make a new company (although the territory is having a crisis roght now they are still a baron they must have savings and such also there is the thing called an investment), this will make the MC and his family prosper more, remeber that the territory is not entirely their own but the kingdom they are in.... If they have a family company they will not just make the family prosper but also the economy of the territory, it will become the specialty of the territory more visitors more people more money and more merchant will invest in the territory for potential and competition.... Also is it quite a norm for MC to check their status first or this MC is just a UNIQUE DUMBA** and the author H****!!! Im excited at first because there is a gourmet novel again for me to read but its just a SE* novel at most in the chapters until now BTW there is another novel using the same character name as this MC with the same type of novel which is gourmet (lol I don't know if this is gourmet because the first 21 chapters but cooking dishes is not even properly mentioned or it is nit ipmentioned even), hope you will improve and also I advise you that upyou get an editor if ever you pursue this nove!!!!!
Its a copy of my vampire system, literally only changing a few things to fit the name of the novel and changing character names, Quite honestly its quite disgusting. Theres nothing unique about it, his power levels stay identical, people stay the same, same starting position, all in all its just a cheap rip off
Amazing.... hopefully you can start updating the story again. It's amazing.
I love sports novel. Keep up the good work.
I loved the story, all the character so far are well builded and even thought we are talking a military and war novel, we can see that the author knows that we need some drama, romance, comedy and relaxed times while reading a novel.
The author so far sounds that he knows exactly what he wants about this novel, and this can change the quality of the novel by tenfold.
Thank you for the good work
I'll give u 5 for now since its interesting... -------------------------------------------------'--'---------------
This book is a masterpiece. Now reincarnated gods are all time favorite of mine along with business. The descriptions the author provides along with the characters are just chef's kiss. I have read till going solo. So my opinion can change after reading more.Also loving the battle scenes along with overpoweredness of the mc. Lastly one last line for Scott- He just like me during my bad days fr fr
A really interesting start!
A System which wants the ruthless MC to be more kind - or to be looked at like that.
Apocalypse is always a nice setting and the bromance is strong in this one.
I hope it won't devolve into some harem-****...
We really have enough of that.
Thanks for providing us with such a nice treat, dear author <3
Almost got baited by this trap of a name, fortunately I read the reviews. This book really has a low stars. Author must have had a netorare fetish.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................