Whoever is in charge of this novel has absolutely zero idea how to properly structure or pace a paragraph, or even a sentence. Bad review until the translator/editor is changed or learns proper grammar.
I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN.Lets talk about:1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'.2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel. 3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans. 3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress. And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME.4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example:1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES. The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.
A unique book i see. A different twist and style to the cultivation world. Solid MC, Solid power system, great plots. Just a little editing and i see a top book in the making. Good one author. ??
This is a great idea, a ok translation, and has stable updates... But are you kidding me? This more unrealistic than the extreme plot armor isekai protags' that are extremely lucky. I have only read 5 chapters and I am regretting reading the summary (I read this so you won't want to read it).First of all no. No one will just go strait to ancient language when a new type of power comes in. Another thing, isn't it questionable how close it is to many korean and chinese novels and beliefs? Also wouldn't the sword, that destroyed the sun, be able to destroy the Earth even if it is a shard? After all, 1,300,000 Earths' can fit inside of the sun and such a sword should be able to destroy the Earth just by tapping the Earth. Also if the shards were smaller than I think the shock waves should be like an extinction bomb and would just vaporize all life of Earth. But hey, what if i'm thinking of it too realistic, after all, it's a fantasy novel made in korea. BUT JESUS IT IS STILL BAD AFTER CHAPTER 4. It just got so boring, after chapter 4, chapter 5 is just filler, and not even ok filler it's really bad! This is the real review: (It is out of 5)Boring (1 is not boring 5 is really boring): 4Filler (1 is no filler 5 is a lot of filler): 3Character's Stupidity (Same as the other 2): 5This world makes sense (1 = a lot of sense, 5 = no sense): 4After reading this I hope you understand and don't read it unless your like me and would just read it to post a bad review.
This is well paced and had me spending my coins to unlock with no second thoughts. I can't wait to see where the rest of this story goes, as it is one of the best I've read in a while. "2 thumbs up!"
This is a better premise for base system story. However grammarb is terrible words not making sense at times. Gender of characters sometimes incorrect. The unit of measurements way to exaggerated. Example given away 5 tons of water per person. For people to be poor no way they could transport that much water let alone store it. I would go back and proofread thoroughly.
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Lol! I am actually scared to write comments in this novel. All the people here hate me... I think. But anyhow, great story. I am loving it. Good job. ???
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A really interesting start!A System which wants the ruthless MC to be more kind - or to be looked at like that.Apocalypse is always a nice setting and the bromance is strong in this one.I hope it won't devolve into some harem-****...We really have enough of that.Thanks for providing us with such a nice treat, dear author <3
A review of a privileged reader:As of right now everything is being lined down by the author perfectly but cons and pros are impossible to avoidCons :Story development is annoyingly slow! Like before in the tower ark i was reading throughout it with in mind 200+ chapters to read more but now its BAD chapters a not long enough too! Half the chapters even in priest of darkness privilege is just all shitty talking! Update stability is never the same time a day! Tge story is so predictable! Author have a no existence talent of the element of suprise! To hell with this am reading to this point because I believe this guy can catch up of things!LIKE u don't need 2 chapters a day of random nonsense with a chapter so short that there's no progress in plot! A whole chapter was about him dodging holding hands with a girl!I just started a month ago and i been lovin the story but plz at least let us have a meaningful chapter or just do 1 day!!!!
thank you for the double update dear author it was amazing and last line was really funny and touché haha I loved it he really missed his queen. let see what rican do the next I am super excited and happy ...