Firstanddotstealer
One star just because they are re posting an already posted novel although this novel is very good but webnovel should choose something new to translate
It's been a while since the last time I read fantasy, but yours took me by surprise. Interesting story! I'm definitely going to keep on reading your story.
Bro I will support you man, but you gotta do a better job with the MC. He’s is a f*****g beta man. Come on you could portray him better than that. Idk if you plan on fixing his mentality as the story goes on but right now your MC is making story suck. It’s my honest opinion man. Everything else is dandy, your MC is just not cutting it.
extremely slow startwhy i really made this review i need xpnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
what the fk is wrong with the author one moment mc is a girl the next it a boy. can't he just stick to one and stop making all this mistakes that like the basics
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I remember reading this to like 400 chapters and then quitting using mtl. I loved the beginning. This story uses the premise of lord if mysteries and adds some pretty unique ideas.... and that's where I stopped liking it. People say if you like lord of mysteries then you'll like this. I just wanna say... it was true at the beginning. Then he turned into a ....SPOILER COMING UP:......Ot started off great. But there is one interesting quirk about his system. Yes. He has a system. He gets exp points by killing other beings, including humans. At the beginning he is against killing other humans for exp.Then at some point his inhibitions disappear. At one point he goes and murders a whole lot of other magical occupational people like him (it wasn't his fault, kind of, he was out of control and being controlled). But after he gets away his only regret is that he couldn't get more pointsThat's when it started getting iffy for me.I'm not looking for a story better or as good as lord of mysteries, but since people kept saying it was a good replacement while waiting for updates I thought I'd try.It's not bad, but it's not good for me. The mc is nothing the lord of mysteries mc. He world building is good but some things get looked over. The mc was pretty good but then he began turning out like typical power hungry mc.There are reasons for why he needs for (there is this character trying to kill him) and the world is changing.Honestly, it's not a bad novel. I just think my expectations were too high. The character and plot development need serious help. But everything else is okay.
Obligatory author's self-promotion :)The genre is pretty cliched, but I hope to bring something new and exciting to it. Please stick around. Things will get interesting soon.Thank you and have a nice day.
I usually love reading novels about games but not this one. I dont know how you can immerse yourself in a game like pubg. It would have been better if the author made the game a fps vrmmo version.
I can't complain about the writing quality and the world development seems interesting enough, but the character development is terrible and the plot seems pretty forced. The story hooked me with the "reincarnation as another species" line, but instantly unhooked me the moment I found out that the entire plot seems to be focused on what would happen if a wolf acted and behaved like a human with sub-par intelligence, blind loyalty, and a habit to disregard any and all logical decisions when left with a pretty human face.At this rate, he might as well have reincarnated into a housecat or a poodle capable of doing card tricks with all the relevance that this plot point has.
WOWOWOWOWOW! Interesting synopsis and the storyline caught my eye very quickly :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Great Story. I have read quiet a bit of stories about virtual reality and this one is quiet different. What I like about this one is that even thought the MC is working for the evil faction he does not play it like he some lunatic and is more incline of this is a game and having fun and making money. Keep up the good work.
