Legend of Bumi

This is my first time writing a review, but i think the story is interesting and I can't wait to see where it goes. So far, I've enjoyed the few chapters i've read, especially the little parts where Xiaodan interacts with Guangru. I do wish I have more chapters to read though... Overall, thank you for this :)

i apologize to the author for almost quitting this book at around chapter 230 and say that this is my 2nd favorite book on here right now and plan on rereading it for years to come after it's finished

I only read the first 6 chapters there are several parts that repeat the same thing several times without getting to the point. It seem like explained were dragged out to make longer chapters. I don't think I can read further but the idea of this story is great. The story really needs an editor as well.

This is a better premise for base system story. However grammarb is terrible words not making sense at times. Gender of characters sometimes incorrect. The unit of measurements way to exaggerated. Example given away 5 tons of water per person.  For people to be poor no way they could transport that much water let alone store it. I would go back and proofread thoroughly.

I say, don't give up on this novel because of the very, very bad grammar in the first chapters.Also, you might think that this is a version of Moonlight Sculptor, and that the MC is like Weed. It looks like, but it is not.Although the development of the history is fast and you can't get yourself to like some of the characters, but you might like it nonetheless.

i think there's manhua of this currently being translated by webnovel????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????