Firstanddotstealer
This is a good book! I would recommend to readers who are into fantasy and Greek Mythology. Keep up with the good work. I've added it to my library so I can read future chapters.....?
Only negative about the novel is the way the author makes him “help” his best friend with assignments no ones reading this to see if the character can get top marks. We read it for the R18 tag and the action. Character development should focus on MC and his love interests after all sooner or later his best friend will either end up dead or written out because he cant keep up with MCs strength.I’ll be honest Im disappointed with the updates because this week it was all “POV” updates and honestly I couldnt care less. Feels like the Authors just using filler material to boost updates. Can you atleast put it in Chronological order so theres some form of structured plot...
the mc is ok but the problem is that there's too much happening to him flashback messed up memories it doesn't make sense and theres to much going on at once it's hard to read the farther you get into it and needs like extra chapters to explain everything
I gave this a try, I really did. But after finishing the prologue (chapter 17), I just didnt have any interest to continue reading. A lot of stuff at the beginning is so confusing and nothing is explained. It leads to a ton of guess work, and even then its difficult to keep track of stuff. It’s hard to tell if the author just didnt want to explain the stuff and expected it to be understood, or if they were trying to make it sound interesting.
It's really amazing story ,I love these contents. These contents always give me more happiness.i hope Mariyam will be wrote more stories Novalis.
Review update.Okey typos are still present. A lot. But story is kinda good I say? Im interested enough in characters and plot, but its too slow paced atm. Im not sure how many thousands of chapters it will take to end.World background needs better explanations, not longer. Better.Also story gets better the futher you are in.Writing needs editor. REALLY.
The story has a lot of potential, it is up to the author to fulfil it, but the description makes it sound epic. Will read soon. Hope it gets a lot a attention in the future.
This is surprisingly interesting and pretty decent. Although there's some elements of Chinese quotes and names mixed in. It certainly is better than most of the other novels for this round's Trial Read.
Good Novel ?Thought I'm a little confused Is the players from the game or real life?________________________________________________________________
love the story so far keep up the good work don't lest people get you down XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Hands down the best novel this batch, it's more original and entertaining to read than others, if you like horror then this will be a great way to pass the time.
