the MC is pretty much a decent nice guy which makes him pretty boring even now that he is a skeleton like many other isekai what I never got the point about turning the MC into monster/undead etc. if they are still gonna act human in all the ways possible. At least put some conflict in the persona, not asking for psycho killer maniac. Skipped most of the fights for the most part they are meh, the spells are convenient maybe too much feels like author avoids showing them in the level up so he can pull whatever helps him progress through the next fight. Something interesting needs to happen soon or least that comedy needs to show.
The whole story was new fresh of story to read as some, the story paced is slow and easy to read, the mc is reaaly drawn out more.
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the story is interesting I encourage the writer to keep writing. charlotte is a wicked lady imagine being under a man's roof for 8years only for the man to find out that the child he called his wasn't his, jayden is a good man , I love the way he handled everything..more grace to the writers elbow
Decent story.
The pacing was slow and for the start of the novel, I guess that's fine.
The grammar and punctuation can be improved.
There is potential but it depends on the author. I think the story could be great with an edit- but that's just my opinion.
Anyway, good luck with the story.
a very good novel with comedy, power ups, face slaps (literally) and well all other elements you would find in a good harem novel..love it
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I Think the author even though he said that it was free but what the hell you keep the rest on your patron page.
the character sound immature like tell me do you think we are reading for joke we are reading to uplift boredom not to bore us to death
So far so good, there are few questions that come up every now and then but the author improved ALOT since the first chapters and it is very noticeable. There are still some unknown factors like how good the author is in world building or character development, will they be one-dimensional characters or will they feel like real people. Guess only time will tell.
I will keep reading and watch the author's constant improvement over-time.
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I like that it is not a transmigration story. We actually see him develop as a player instead of being instantly a god level player. The MC is a good person that had to turn to crime due to his financial circumstances but is trying to turn his life around. Overall, much better than some of the current novels like shadow hack.
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totally diferent from most books on site this is original and epic story wish this can get into a editorial some day and travel the world love your work autor thx