nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!!
nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!!
nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!!
nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!!
I actually would recommend this novel. I have only read a couple chapters but it has potential.
I have to rate it one start on principle though, because YOU FORGOT THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS OF THE NOVEL?!
I dunno how you mess that up, but since they're missing, we don't have any idea how the story starts!
I looked at the raws, and read some poor MTL of the first two chapters! I know they're missing!
There's not even any reason to have them missing, they're normal chapters!
I'd appreciate it if you would just fix this.
The expectations I had from the title and the summary was one and the actual content was just not what was expected and not in a good way either. This is one of those click-bait novels that promises a fresh concept but infact it's just the same old same old with different character names. The integration of technology and cultivation seems so misplaced and unnecessary. The author has very little knowledge on how to develop the story, when the protagonist is actually a 100 year old man. By the current chapters, the author has talent in writing a excellent standard cultivation novel with the usual standard MC with cheats. But a novel with a new concept sadly no.
Some minor mistakes with the translation quality usually not serious and doesn't hinder you from reading. Can't tell what the stability of updates are because most the chapters were released on the same day. Story develops in a unique way putting a spin on the normal style of these types of story's though it mostly follows a simple template. Character design isn't explored all that much but it still gives us descriptions of the characters personality. World background is executed well but is not explored much as it is basically just our world. 4.4/5
Overall Review: There are moments where you can get confused because of the different common-sense because the author is from china so you have to infer some things about the story but it doesn't hinder you from enjoying the story Translation Quality has some minor mistakes but those can be overlooked. Can't say anything about the Update Stability so far. Story develops in a unique way with a simple template Characters design is rather simple but well explained nothing to really comment about the world background.
I would like to add that these are executed very well and have a unique charm about them that I can't really grade
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We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give, never gonna give
(Give you up)
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
What can I say?... I found the book so interesting and easy to read!! The world-building is okay, same with the plot. The characters are okay too and the writing quality isn't bad.
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MC had a fiancée, she was possessed by a system OR went crazy and is using telekinetic powers to drive her ex fiancé crazy. It's a horror book in both forms. Poor author must have been influenced by dreams with cthulu and didn't even realize, he still thinks he's safe when in fact he's already had his mind stained with the madness of the great ancients.
wohooooooo
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Amazing