I know this is supposed to be a gag story, so I started reading with that in mind. Unfortunately, it hasn't got any plot... I neither found it engaging nor funny... also, chapters of around 50 words put me off even more... The only plus that I can say is that the author may be able to write well if he/she ever puts up a properly planned story on this site.Seriously... I've read better gags on royalroad & similar sites... I truly expected better content from this site...
Came back to give it another try and it is still as bad as I remember with sun par writing. The racism and nationalism of China better then everyone. The insanity of what is basically a story about a reincarnator reincarnating to a world where they get to reincarnate to maybe get abilities so they can go back and reincarnate again and again
so i think i found another top rank material...good job author.. i just suggest please dont drag an arc in your story in the future...so far.. this ones really good... worth the power stone i will give you for few days in the future..
totally diferent from most books on site this is original and epic story wish this can get into a editorial some day and travel the world love your work autor thx
