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Why do they need to bring back books that were already in the voting pool... If only they were smart and picked up a good book thats not finished. For example "The Dark King" ("Dark King" on Here). Wake up webnovel and get your **** together!!
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This is so good! Amazing writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hope you have great luck writing!
Honestly very sexy and erotic. I found myself rereading it and just really enjoying the story and how well written the characters are. I like this story.
The main chachters orgin is confusing he seems to know about everything and is a survival expert and gun expert and just about good at everything and this is a copy of doomsday bunker upgrade but is worse because it's more unnatural and feels stupid I would like if doomsday bunker upgrade had this guy's system because we dont know what the bunker he has is the space how he built it and how he built a 6 room bunker underground out of pure steel in a few months so the main problems with this novel are the mcs background which I read to chapter 15 and is still unknown and how fast paced it is it's just a bad copy of doomsday bunker upgrade which doomsday bunker upgrade isn't even that great so 2/10 novel
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I love how you designed the characters. Most of the time our lives change but if we don't take control life ends up changing us sometimes even to all sorts of worst kinds. You got everything well portrayed. Keep it up!
The plot is very very grippy and I enjoyed most of it. I would also advise you to run a grammar check before publishing it and that would just add to the look of it. I love how you designed your world and the detail in some aspects is almost like it's in front of us. Overall, solid job!
Translations are a bit rough, but despite that this is an interesting story that delves into Lovecraftian horror. At first, it appears to be your standard VRMMO type novel, but we slowly discover that not everything is as it appears and that certain characters that were previously seen as innocuous are much more sinister.
This, due to other Lovecraftian stories getting whacked from Trial Read, is a nice change of pace from the usual fare on this website and would probably appeal to the same demographic as Lord of Mysteries if not for the translation quality.
Its translations appear to be slightly higher than MTL and there are several terms that flag it as having been initially MTLed (using blood quantity instead of health for example). However, once you adjust to the translations, it is a lot more enjoyable.
Chances are pretty slim that it will be chosen however due to the initial chapters having subpar translation quality, but I believe this is one of the more thought provoking novels to come through Trial Reads since the initial purges.
I normally don’t take the time to write reviews for all the novels that I read, but this novel is significantly better than the 7 reviews indicate that it is. Additionally, given the number of worthy novels that had been dropped from Trial Reads recently, I felt it prudent to endorse a novel that is trying to be something different from the typical martial arts fare on this website.
Sooo gooood loovee it!! it's unique and really one of a kind, in my opinion. Plus, author always improving and would reply to almost every comment. It's just too great.
Pretty good
