I give it a 5 star, just because this book is making me delightful .
It needs work but I can tell the author is passionate and likes to write. I can appreciate the effort and am willing to respect the dedication to writing something of this length. There’s a lot of room for change and improvement.
I really admire the novel's captivating beginning and its compelling development. It had me completely engrossed after just 10 chapters, and I couldn't resist reading all the available chapters. Eagerly anticipating more and looking forward to the journey ahead!
Pretty good so far. I like the concept of an Immortal faction. Certain parts can be kind of confusing but overall a good read.
Writing as of chapter 8: The story development and world background is slowly building up and his interesting to see. The characters interactions are interesting and feel real. There is a nice twist to the tower, dungeon genre as the MC isn't the only one reincarnating. It seems to hold potential. I might update this review as I continue reading it!
Writing is neat and good choices of words that could easily understand by the readers. The narration took a bit serious in the beginning but the author made sure to explain his/her ideas about the plotline, it is quite descriptive in fact, though long sentences sometimes bores the eyes, the story piques interest! A good read, keep up the work dear author!???
just would like to know if this book is cancelled or on hiatus cause iIlove the story
one of the best cultivation Rpg I have read so far. But the chapters are short fot reading and while Iam reading they complete too fast because it's short chapters,
Author please increase the chapter length
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I really like martial oddessy, this is the second time am reading it, I wish the author can write the part 2.l love the mixture of comedy, action and romance in the novel, thanks author
Why is this novel chosen over the Tokyo Monk novel that is 1000 times better?
All the best are the supernatural ones with ghosts that they put to read, and they are NEVER chosen on that drug.
I want MONKEY IN TOKYO IN THE PLACE OF THIS CHOSEN romance.
This novel needs to picked. It is interesting and unique, though it has a few predictable events. The comedy is on point and almost every chapter will make you laugh.