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Other than the overall improvement of his status, he was now fully equipped with rare grade equipment.
"Don't try to bullshit me," Ares growled.
Sun - I'm not your sir ok I am your husband
The blood flow to my head and before I could think twice I had already punched him in the eye. As he recoiled back I smiled and was about to rush in, if I were to give him a lucky punch that could make him injured or even kill the bastard now it would be perfect.
"yes why?" itsuki heart pounding with at the same thinking "is it real? sophie is in front of me" itsuki can't stop himself from the happiness he feel and he stood up from the bed and he hugged the girl who still had a sleepy face. "sohpie is that you? i miss you so much!!! i have a many question" itsuki continue speaking but he girl push him back as shocked
How could he?!
Suatu ketika Ucup beli HP untuk pertama kalinya karena dorongan dari pacar tercintanya. Setelah beli Hp Ucup langsung di registrasi.
The forest is lit up by the sunset as 3 figures were seen strolling across the forest. The party of 3 stops every once in a while to look at flowers and tree formations as they slowly follow the stone pebbled path. As they walk forward one of them runs ahead and turns around and begins to talk.
Aizawa was meeting with all the UA teachers. With Izuku and Katsuki too. Even Endeavor was far away with his arms folded, disheveled but proud.
i just read your few chapters of today so i wanted to say ty for the chapters, but i kinda feel you could have used 1-2 chapters for the picking of orphans, some things like rare old body physics etc etc. you know what makes them special etc, i kinda can see you "rush it a little" to get to canon, but i think its your story and if you want these orphans to play a bigger role a deeper introduction would be ok, and on the same not, interactions with people he need can be longer, for example the meeting at the banquet, after talking about the future, you just "jumped" ahead, i am not saying its bad i am just saying you could improve on it as the story will hopefully keep going for a long time
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