I love this story a lot, i love the characters and the development of the story? Been supporting this from the start? waiting for more updates??
I personally came to Webnovel because of this novel. I started reading it on Royal Road but wondered why there hadn't been any updates after chapter 28. I Googled it and found it here.As for me, I don't mind if the main character comes off as a simp at first or if he seems confused about being reborn or anything like that. I just want to read a story like this.To me, this story is good enough to keep me engaged. Sure, there are a few errors here and there, but that's typical for a new author. So for me, I don't mind giving this story a 5-star rating.
This is my first novel I wrote and hopefully won't be the last. I appreciate any sort of feedback you have so please roast my work.I'll try my best to update 1 chapter daily but keep in mind they'll be quite short.Hope you enjoy the story
It’s difficult to give this story a good rating. Although the story starts out well, it quickly progresses to points that don’t make sense. For example the MC is four years old and travels out into the forest to train - where did he learn these techniques? The story seems to completely disappear once the forest arc starts, and so I head to drop it. I suggest rewriting the plot before it’s too late author.
Writing quality, Story Development, world background ground are all good
A good story plot, Mike is an amazing character
I like the book pacing, mc is a really enjoyable character to follow. Added to the library!
I am at chapter 30 currently. I actually like the story even the pacing is great. Though i got to ask what's with having all that brain power yet he can not do something as simple as analyse situations? e.g. he has the ability to read minds yet he doesn't use it when it matters like when he sits in class, he just watches the moonlight girls do as they please when he can do something about it like seriously how does he just go with the flow till trouble catches up. This is a huge let down especially considering its all females surrounding him. Do respond i seriously want to hear you thought process before i proceed
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New Concept of Cultivation and System is always appreciated. WRITING QUALITY--- One of the in my collection!?STORY DEVELOPMENT--- Very Good pace and there are many Plot twists as we move further. ?CHARACTER DESIGN--- This is one of Best Asset of this Story.?UPDATING STABILITY--- It is Regular and Timely. ☺️WORLD BACKGROUND--- Very Nicely arranged and described.(also my favourite) It is not like those Complicated Ones and It is quite easy to understand this one.?ADVISE--- [READ IT NOW BECAUSE IT IS WORTH IT] ?
"Your welcome desu."
"Oh, it's not finish yet? Okay, because mrs is a damn teacher, all of you can do your homework in here, but remember. You have to finish it?"