Bear in mind that Idk how to write reviews. This novel is very good so far and it's only picking up as the plot advances, it's main premice is something I've never seen before so is very interesting and the main characters are all unique, I also love the 'futuristic fantasy' setting.And as I am sure it's very important to most of you, there is no harem... and I hope it continues that way *stares at author*
i don't like romance much but with the rewards from the competions I gave it a try and I must say that romance may be my new favorite genre
The spider queen legendary beast as bonded beast ruined it for me, but still a good book, keep it up
Potential banger. Definitely up there in my opinion to be a future contender in All-Time category just needs to be fine-tuned in some areas... Mainly that status screen issue everything else is my cup of tea though. Great work.
It’s a pretty good book and I definitely enjoy reading it while on break at work.
I have never seen a story with more clichés than this one.- arrogant narrow minded young masters, check- forced but shallow Lovestories, check- everyone hunting the MC, check- separation of the 2 mainleads, check- forced suppression of MC's cultivation, check(that is only 84 chapters in) This story looks more like a list of clichés that are ticked of one after another.I'm not sure why the author thinks it's good to write that way but it's his book so you do you.
Writing Quality: 3/5 Average or readable enough, it lacks a bit of editing especially in the first chapters where the "i" is not capitalizedexample: "Where i am? is this a dream? 'Someone kidnapped me? No, there is no reason to throw me here then. Do i sleepwalked? No, i can't reach that far just by sleepwalking.'Stability of Updates: 2/5 UPDATE MORE! Like seriously it needs a daily update.Story Development: 4/5 I won't say it's the best but where can you find something so unique as a Slice of life wuxia? Where the main character is neither the antagonist or someone special more like a bystander type of character.Character Design: 3/5 Too be honest the only thing this story lacks is characters hopefully there will be romance in this since it can get boring really fast without any stimulation regarding relationships.World Background: 3/5 Average enough but not bad.Total score: 3/5Highly recommended even if my rating is a bit low, the plot is interesting, the writing even though not edited can be readable enough.In the later chapters, it seems to be fixed still you should edit the first few chapters with editing tools like Grammarly.
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A synopsis that presents the complete story about the mafia plot. And when you start reading, you realize the thoroughness when describing details, such as the voices that differentiate one region or country from another.I like the idea of taking a distance, of reacting intespectively. It allows channeling all the senses and giving a planned response.
SRIUS, tidak ada yang memberi tags Tragic untuk novel ini??, Atau lemah ke kuat??, Sudah updatenya lama, ceritanya lama" kaya novel" naek juga yang udah stuck!!
Can't wait for the next chapter to release. looking forward to reading more. it is so sad that there is so few chapters right now wish i could read more.