My second review for this story.I don't know why I'm still reading this. I could handle the poor grammar but the amount of times I've seen the wrong names used is astounding.But to be fair the names can very well be interchangeable, they are mostly interchangeable. Its hard to comprehend the love interest here, he met Rachael, Sarah's sister, once before she fell for him. Jill or either of the twins would have made a better pairing.I don't know how much more I will read of this.The romance tag is an afterthought, MC while he gets stronger he's constantly bellow the bar. What you would think is foreshadowing is just forgotten plots points.
Alright! Another unique story added on the list.... The Story is good... as well as the character interactions...The flow of the story is quite fast but at least it matches the story-line since it is an Apocalypse Survival story.. And another thing there are some things that are confusing for me... like the Magic stuffs... or maybe it is just me or I haven't a lot of chapters yet.. Will see if I read further...Overall the story is good and worth to read...Try it guys I were you!!!
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
Tried to read it the grammaR stopped me from enjoying the story it was SiMple stuff that would be easily Fixed by rereading the work, if you got annoyed by the constant capitals theN good luck
straight up trash after 100+ ch. Don't read.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Utter crap.
Awesome character definition, great plot nothing too boring nor too overwhelming, very poetic and great background details. Intriguing, waiting for more chapters??
Every character seems bipolar.MC goes from confident and calm one moment, to a stuttering mess the next cause he sees a strong stick, that had murderous intent, then that stick goes from murderous to acting cute, then the MC who was so afraid he went 'please .... Please.... Don't come closer......' says that the stick is friendly and approachable 5 paragraphs later? Really?Fourth wall breaks I actually didn't mind, I just read em in Morgan Freeman voice.But I've yet to find a likeable character in this book, or anything at all other than the system to hook me in. goddess that acts nice but is a *****? PassStick MC that changes personality every chapter? Pass.Girl leader of alliance who's both a murderous berserker and acts cutesy? Pass.Everyone wants to refine MC into a weapon? Could have been good but just became boring. PassThere's yet to be a single hook that made me want to continue, not even the MCs growth path as he already knows exactly what he wants, and how to get there, it's like googling a build for a game, will you end up strong? Sure. Is it fun? No.