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Really, all of the superiors do it. they kind of..
"There is nothing you can do, not yet at least. The church has too much influence, to go against them would only cause you trouble. No, you must wait and grow your power, create your own faction. Be wary, there are many who would seek to turn you into a puppet king."
"You are ChenXin?" He asked
Sakuya nod and she starts moving her hand to hold my sister body, slowly she pulled her up by supporting her back to make sure she doesn't fall. She cupped her chin and opened it up, revealing sharp and long fangs inside.
Whipping out my map, I began to trace my steps, looking out for anyone or anything suspicious that was to follow me. The best exit was in the dungeons, I know, ironic, but it was at the far end so I had to be extremely quiet and weary of people in the cells.
good characters, background, Main Character, and story.I like how the mc does whatever he likes, his coldness, his strength and his personality the most.simply a well written book, love it.
"..., ok"
"Oh. Right," Nichiren said, feeling dumb about missing something so basic.
invisible dragon:aw shit
colbobs words were true he true didnt use 1% of his power
There are some mistakes, obviously, the most serious being that the boss and the other "people" are shocked and then find an absurd excuse for a "person" to knock down a tree with one blow. It needs romance, after all it is a vampire story. And I would really like it to have a development of creating a vampire kingdom/clan with the MC leading it. And obviously the MC finding a way to neutralize the weaknesses of his new race, that's the most obvious point. Anyone with 2 brain cells wouldn't want to lose control or have a lapse like an intermittent madman because of blood or something else.Final: Writing 5; Update 4; Story 4; Character 3; World 5...
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